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  1. 07-11-2011 #1
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    Critique My Essay

    Anyone willing to Critique my essay?
    Please comment below and ill Pm it to you.
    Its a Narrative essay(An event that happen in your life)
    I wrote about me winning a Race
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    What's the topic?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Assalamu alaikum View Post
    what? maybe stop talk with riddles and with words i am not even know.
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    Essay on what?
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    Quote Originally Posted by DomoGenesis View Post
    Whats a Critique?
    Where you point out the negatives and positives.
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    You're totally jelly am I right?

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  8. 07-11-2011 #8
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    I updated more about the essay
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    Sure, why not.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Assalamu alaikum View Post
    what? maybe stop talk with riddles and with words i am not even know.
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    Giveth here.

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    Quote Originally Posted by xSnipe.Alt View Post
    I'm willing to!
    Hey gratz on your 1337 ban ill hit mine tommorow night around this time if not before.
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    hey yunno what? i'll read it for you i just finished that class just over a month ago :P
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    What do i get out of this.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Obama View Post
    What do i get out of this.
    Knowledge - All other things
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    Upload it and we all can
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