issues:
1) blending
2) flow
3) colors
4) lighting
5) C4D is overlapping halo dudes chest
Good things:
1) HQ render
2) i THINK i see a piece of stock in the BG
3) nice text (what is it?)
3/10 gj
Lucky, Assassin showed me this TuT to try out. I don't really know if it's good or not. CnC please!
Version 1:
Version 2:
Last edited by Katy; 07-31-2011 at 10:39 PM.
"Do not argue with an idiot. He will drag you down to his level and beat you with experience."Princess since: 7/3/2012Need something translated from/to English? PM/VM me!
issues:
1) blending
2) flow
3) colors
4) lighting
5) C4D is overlapping halo dudes chest
Good things:
1) HQ render
2) i THINK i see a piece of stock in the BG
3) nice text (what is it?)
3/10 gj
War does not determine who is right- only who is left.
Skype User ID: cade*****legrove
Halo and Arial ahaha. and thanks, and i was debating on putting the C4D behind him. Is this better? Tried to work out the lighting and the color flow. Also, that is a stock in the background, and it was a cut-out from my original, just duplicated a couple times (because i had to make the liquefied flames )
Last edited by Katy; 07-31-2011 at 10:37 PM.
"Do not argue with an idiot. He will drag you down to his level and beat you with experience."Princess since: 7/3/2012Need something translated from/to English? PM/VM me!
get a medium sized C4d and make the main movement going middle bottom to top right anglish and make it matching colors or at least comp[limentary so it looks good because it is making the action go upwards when the gun is sideways so it has like 4 flows right now ...
try to reduce to 1
War does not determine who is right- only who is left.
Skype User ID: cade*****legrove
"Do not argue with an idiot. He will drag you down to his level and beat you with experience."Princess since: 7/3/2012Need something translated from/to English? PM/VM me!
The render needs to be apart of the bg.
Don't be scurred to place effects on him
Assasin she had 1 small line of C4D on his chest thats why i told her to take it off, please forgive me if it sounded like i said never do it because i also told her to but a bigger one on in order to create flow
she is doing a good job for just starting tho
War does not determine who is right- only who is left.
Skype User ID: cade*****legrove
pretty good, he doesnt stand out enough though IMO