Under the Ocean Sim

[yoman35]

Hey guys, Ive just graduated from high school and plan to start a coureer in visual effects/ editing for companies. I'll start a little bit while Im still in college but here is some of what I've been working on.

please give me some feedback on what you think
BY THE WAY, i made this from scratch using adobe after effects cs4. took 12+ hours to make, i experimented alot

[Matt]

The text doesn't seem to be in the water, it just looks like it's put there.

[+dd.Shift]

more camera movement, maybe some more life (like add some fishes or whatevs)



maybe some integrated text within the sea bed, having the camera pass by

[Keroaplt]

Make the text be in the water not like above it be sure to make a precomp to change that shit maybe some fishies not too noticeable but just enough fishes and have a 3d camera go like around

[yoman35]

Make the text be in the water not like above it be sure to make a precomp to change that shit maybe some fishies not too noticeable but just enough fishes and have a 3d camera go like around

forgot to make a precomp thanks though

[HW$%yh5eh5ea5heheh5]

looks interesting for a start. definitely needs more to it though

[gamerboy667]

well iu think it looks great but the light changes too much ...

[Smurfyv]

That looks really nice!
What font is that btw?

[Scrcrw]

pretty cool
but the text needs to be incorporated in more

[Leaf]

looks great, how did you make those plants?
and precomping is awsum, you should use it more often.

[[MPGH]Austin]

Generally, it was amazing. Just make the seaweed not symmetrical. try to make them different sizes and different shape.

gj none the less.