My First ever 3 renders o.O

[fecher]

[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/SeyekoRender1.png[/IMG]
[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/SeyekoRender2.png[/IMG]
[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/SeyekoRender3.png[/IMG]

i know i suck but im workn on it

[[CF]Tree]

Work on your edges,there a bit sharp.

[Keroaplt]

Work on making the edges around the subject smoother and choosing better stocks to render

[Assalamu alaikum]

Not bad for your first three..

but yeah Not digging the Scooby ones..

I'd actually use the last if the top of the head wasn't cropped off.

[fecher]

Not bad for your first three..

but yeah Not digging the Scooby ones..

I'd actually use the top of the head wasn't cropped off.

Thats how it was in the picture

[HoLyNeSs]

Nice renders, I like them, if I liked scooby doo I would do something with them =P

[Empire]

Your missin some stuff, and you cut too much on others.
Pic 1. Too sharp. You cut too much on his feet. and on the left side you cut too little and made it too angular.
Pic 2. Always a bad idea to use pics with so much lighting. You cut freds elbow.
Pic 3. You cut WAAAAAY too much on his pants. Like i can see where his pants should be and they aren't cus you cut it.
(usually you don't wanna pick renders with cut offs like the head).
You also missed the inside right by the barel.

Overall: keep at it. Ctrl+z and ctrl+shift+z are your friends.

Oh and this might help: try putting ona black or white background with the intended render on top. THat way you will spot things a lot quicker and big mistakes/bad looks can be avoided much more easily.