My First Recorded Rap

[Bombsaway707]

You were rapping fast.

LOL wut not really, i can rap 3 times faster then that, i can keep up close to the temp of pale kid raps fast

It's pretty cool, But your voice doesn't sound like an average rappers voice. Try rapping a little deeper next time.

I'm only 15 I'll still try

Sorry bro, but u need to keep the tempo.

Do you know how hard it is to have the same amount of syllables for each line? I wrote/recorded this in 30 minutes. Next time ill work on filling up each syllable

[Less Than Three]

Didn't seem like it went with the tempo.

[Polo™]

LOL wut not really, i can rap 3 times faster then that, i can keep up close to the temp of pale kid raps fast



I'm only 15 I'll still try


Do you know how hard it is to have the same amount of syllables for each line? I wrote/recorded this in 30 minutes. Next time ill work on filling up each syllable

Oh lol "pale kids rap fast".

[Bombsaway707]

Didn't seem like it went with the tempo.

Cuz i don't fill up syllables with shit like most rappers do, if i can expand the syllables i just stretch out the word instead of going nikka shit or w/e rappers use to fill gaps. If i spent more time i could probably fill up all the syllables, and it was also suppose to seem kinda off/stressed out like eminems earlier raps where hes yelling

[Less Than Three]

Cuz i don't fill up syllables with shit like most rappers do, if i can expand the syllables i just stretch out the word instead of going nikka shit or w/e rappers use to fill gaps. If i spent more time i could probably fill up all the syllables, and it was also suppose to seem kinda off/stressed out like eminems earlier raps where hes yelling

I kinda see where you're going with that. I honestly think it would sound better if you filled in the syllables though.

[skate4l1fe]

say bitch instead of nigga

[Hate]

to hard for the Rhymes
Good apart from that
never rap battling you kkkkk

[Mr.1337]

bad flow/choice of words. Good beats/voice tho.