Slipknot

[Tyraell101]

CnC please on the flow and lighting, I couldn't make the right render blend in with yellow, fml

[Scrcrw]

dont go for dual focals till your actually good
boring and monotone
the effects suck, you have like two disc things, they aren't thought out

[Paradox]

Floating head syndrome.

Resize render smaller.
Like in scrcrws tag above the render is more blended,and well composed and helps maintain proper depth.

[Tyraell101]

dont go for dual focals till your actually good
boring and monotone
the effects suck, you have like two disc things, they aren't thought out

okay thx. ima try something new with the same background. thx
gonna change the topic name ands hit aswell