Business Card Pre-Final

[apitite.for.distruction]

Heres a business card I put together. Maybe you guys can give me some feedbacks on what I can improve on it before I present it to my client.



theres also this one but my client said it wasnt what he had in mind. Personaly I agree with him lol, it kinda looks like a wedding or funeral home business card:

[-[standoff]-]

i personally like the chocolate one,

but then again the first ones are a nice touch but maybe you shuold incorporate more about the business itself, such as owners or even subtle pictures or engrave its logo on the card. i know you have the main logo, but engrave one up the top left or something

[apitite.for.distruction]

k, thnx for the input, ill see what it looks like and post it after

[The_Enigma]

its too... simple. needs more oomph. like add something to catch someones eye like a pattern or a border or something. try that out.

[[MPGH]Dave84311]

The red one is my style. Personally I would have made something around the lines of that card.

[vega]

i like the first 2, their simple and sophisticated looking, not too much pizazz because this is the buisness world we're lookin at =P

[Shampoo]

The red care is sexy, could use more contact info in it though. :X

I don't really like the gray one under it or the funeral home one.

[Mikoll]

I don't think it needs more "oomph", more and more effects take the beauty from a clean simple image.

Nice cards, I like the red.

[[MPGH]arunforce]

IMO, the first one looks like a billboard, the second one looks like a funeral card.

Try something more traditional (if not the colors, at least the format).
That's just my opinion, though the first one really caught my eye, but I don't like it that much after further inspection (due to it resembling a billboard).

Just my opinion.