Your lyrics? Wow..It's good enough to be sung.
Tell me how this song sounds or atleast the lyrics if you can't read the tab.
Constructive criticism, no ******s. I'm writing a new song to play live. Thank you.
CAPO 7
Standard Tuning
e
B
G
D
A
E
INTRO:
e|-0-0-3-0-0-| |-0-0-3-0-0-| |-0-0-3-0-0-| |-0-0-3-0-0-|
B|-0-3-3-3-0-| |-0-3-3-3-0-| |-0-3-3-3-0-| |-0-3-3-3-0-|
G|-0-0-0-0-0-| |-2-2-2-2-2-| |-0-0-0-0-0-| |-0-0-0-0-0-|
D|-0-0-0-0-0-| |-0-0-0-0-0-| |-2-2-2-2-2-| |-2-2-2-2-2-|
A|-2-2-2-2-2-| |-0-0-0-0-0-| |-2-2-2-2-2-| |-3-3-3-3-3-|
E|-3-3-3-3-3-| |-2-2-2-2-2-| |-0-0-0-0-0-| |-0-0-0-0-0-|
Each Chord x3 Last 4th chord x4 of each set.
CHORUS:
|-0-| |-0-| |-0-| |-0-|
|-1-| |-1-| |-1-| |-3-|
|-2-| |-0-| |-0-| |-0-|
|-2-| |-2-| |-0-| |-0-|
|-0-| |-3-| |-2-| |-2-|
|-0-| |-0-| |-3-| |-3-|
Each chord x8
LYRICS:
(intro)
Warm
Warm is the wrong word
That I would use to describe you
I’m only telling the truth
Cold
Such a vague meaning but
Cold is how I left you
Standing there in the parking lot
As I gave it all back
Even your moms melting pots
Wrong
I know you were everything
The one thing that was my only thing
Guess the part of jealously
Made hate me.
(chorus)
I have nothing ill against
Hope you don’t feel the pain.
Go around and be ok.
But I’m telling you
I’m not going to stay
No matter what you say
I'm not okay
(intro)
Fast-forward two years later
Now you’re a statue
So petrified you can’t move
Immobile
Sitting there emotionless
I didn’t do this
Your insecurity
Made me the enemy so
I had to leave you petrified
(chorus)
I have nothing ill against
Hope you don’t feel the pain.
Go around and be ok.
But I’m telling you
I’m not going to stay
No matter what you say
I'm not okay
(intro)
Ice covered on your face
When are you gonna break
Peppermint last
Only One day
So one last time
Take a look back
Find all your answers
To why I went away.
(chorus)
I have nothing ill against
Hope you don’t feel the pain.
Go around and be ok.
But I’m telling you
I’m not going to stay
No matter what you say
I'm not okay
Last edited by Oneirish; 01-11-2009 at 08:43 PM.
Your lyrics? Wow..It's good enough to be sung.
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what type of music is this? rap/rock/? sounds like a soft romantic type..
nice lyrics
I am the God.
are you gonna use FL studio? Just wondering.
It's a soft Acoustic song. Do you know of Dashboard Confessional, Plain White T's, Howie Day. Stuff like that I guess.
Ya, Lol. I'll try. I need to get a good recording software to do with my friend. Or if someone films at one of my live performances.
Umm in 1 week. So have to get everything ready. Opening for a guy named Brett Dennen. So it should be good.
nice nice. good luck. I'll read over lyrics tomorrow
tape it and post it on mpgh <3
we would love to make fun of your singing
Gourav you haven't heard me. Dave, Arun, Paroxysm, and I think jetamay heard me sing, harmonica, and guitar. And liked it, so ya.
Looks like a good song Irish cant wait to hear
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