First Ever Large Art

[Mr.Seyeko]

[IMG]https://i1058.photobucke*****m/albums/t419/iTzSeyeko/IronManLA.png[/IMG]

[Mafiascared]

looks.... awsome? o:

[Royce]

Nice lighting
nice use of c4d

I dont like the blurring, I think it is used better for photography
I dont like the text either

[Solo]

It's a little generic for me. Would rather see something more creative!

Did the OP really just De-rep me for being polite?

[Ryan]

Trash that text before anything else.

[[SMA] Paradise`]

Deviantart link should not be there, kills the whole mood.

[Black Eyed Peas]

@iTzSeyeko

[Ryan]

@iTzSeyeko

You're wrong about everything but the text. Even the light source is a minor issue compared to it.

[Royce]

Deviantart link should not be there, kills the whole mood.

this

I have no clue why you added that

[Mr.Seyeko]

Since i am going to full sail university i have to start putting text like that to show people my portfolio for now. i admit its a lil big. but mehh to me its not a big deal.

[Royce]

Since i am going to full sail university i have to start putting text like that to show people my portfolio for now. i admit its a lil big. but mehh to me its not a big deal.

if your going to add credits, add it to the corner.

[Mr.Seyeko]

No .

[Ryan]

No .

He actually has a point. Small and in the corner, not drawing too much attention is way better than ruining your art with it.

[Empire]

Since i am going to full sail university i have to start putting text like that to show people my portfolio for now. i admit its a lil big. but mehh to me its not a big deal.

Not to be a downer but you shouldn't put THAT in your portfolio.

You didn't make the render, text is awful, bad lighting. The lensflare is hardly needed. I think the best part is the background honestly, which again, is not made by you.

Trust me man, if your going for a portfolio this is something that it should not have in it.

[Royce]

No .

He actually has a point. Small and in the corner, not drawing too much attention is way better than ruining your art with it.

Yes .