umm...

[Metro]

my fist attempt with c4ds, it got a little out of hand
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[Chloe Sakuna]

It looks over burned over sharpened. The C4d's don't flow. Go look for a c4d flow tutorial. Remember to set c4d's to Lighten and try different ones also. make sure that you don't over burn stuff.

[Metro]

It looks over burned over sharpened. The C4d's don't flow. Go look for a c4d flow tutorial. Remember to set c4d's to Lighten and try different ones also. make sure that you don't over burn stuff.

lol i didnt burn at all,just tons of like overlays and crap

[Sharpryno]

Looks waay to messy.
Looks sharpened.
7.5/10

[Ryguy]

mesy and over sharpened.

[BSG.Flash]

The concept it good, but as everyone is saying, it's way too over sharpened.
The color marks on the sides work in with the render well, and I can also see the flow of your sig.
Next time, try making it not so cluttered :|
7/10

[BSG.Flash]

Sorry about the double post, lag.