Just looks like you slapped a shitload of C4D's together, and smudged the background.
It's not that bad, but all you did was put C4D's.
Found some mr robin c4ds lying around : D and dont have homework today : D
so this shit happened:
[IMG]https://i1094.photobucke*****m/albums/i452/Paradoxion/blondee.png[/IMG]
Just looks like you slapped a shitload of C4D's together, and smudged the background.
It's not that bad, but all you did was put C4D's.
You tried too much in one go. 4/10
I think that render should not be there.
Too much shit going on. The lightning is too harsh.