Better?

[SquareSpoon]

I have made another signature similar to the style of my last one, is this one any better?



Please give me some feedback Thank you!

[iVici]

I really like your style. Though I have no clue what's going on in the left side, the flow in your signatures are very..... awesome. =D

[[MPGH]Doc]

It's pretty cool, but overly sharp in certain places. Definitely got flow, I'll give you that.

[SquareSpoon]

Yea i sharpened it and i realized it was too sharp but i was too lazy to go back and fix it cuz i did apply image and blurred and sharpened on the same layer so id have to re do it

[Katy]

Very creative concept. Seems overly bright in some places though, specifically her forearm and chin.

[Scrcrw]

It's over sharpened in some places, but the rest is pretty good. The one thing it lacks though is a real pop, it doesn't really jump out at you or have a wow factor

[SquareSpoon]

I noticed that too @Scrcrw but I couldnt get it to work how i wanted it. Maybe burn/dodge? a little? idk haha i was just actually working on this again (reopened the project) but i think its a dead end haha

[Scrcrw]

it's more your that your colour alterations (i assume gradient maps) have washed out the colours a fair bit, it's also comes down to choosing brighter colours or renders sometimes

[SquareSpoon]

The stock image was a little washed out to begin with too but I'll keep that in mind for my next piece. What are your thoughts on the on in my signature? There's another thread with it posted in there but I'd like to hear your thoughts.

[Scrcrw]

one in your sig needs somework on the focus, bit of his hair are blurred
smudging is hard to do on stocks unless you kinda smudge the whole thing around the person
not bad though, try working with some smaller canvases to see what you can do in a more limited space

[Baltasar]

i like it men

[Jacket]

Dat lip .

[Pr0aimer]

Well your flow isn't good at all cause how you made it it distracts the eyes
just on the girls body, and who wanna watch that ? i would like to see a version of this one with out the stuff
under her face. is it possible ? of course it is if you're not lazy

but the colours are great nicely done and the effect is awesome
but you get rid off the stuff under her face !! messes up the flow