Make a storyline

[sharkfiq123]

Nak act!!NOW!!!!

[takmokkimon]

okay .. so i have to wait for the video then i can do my work .. what about the scene .. when can we start to act ???

ASK @Apakaumau12 ...HE THE PRODUCER

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U STILL THE SCRIP WRITER BUUT U CAN DO IT AFTER RECEIVE THE VID FROM @Koompa..

[saifulzamri]

Nak act!!NOW!!!!

ok ko jadi mafia...

[DJ_Dreamer]

hmmm i think about the story let @takmokkimon think but all i need is

1st: all people party to celebrate christmas in rappongi @takmokkimon u think what will they say)

2nd:suddenly a group of mafia showed up and kill some people then they saw cathy which is rich(u will be this role? please apply sooner tomorrow practice)

3rd: they kidnapped her.

4th: Cathy's father worried and call Garena's agent (Which is me and mirulkeem)

5th:me and @mirulkeem found that Cathy is in Sand Strom2 located in red team house .

6th: there are 2 guard 1 at the right door 1 at the front door.

7th:2 more guard pattroling the place

8th the mafia leader which is @saifulzamri is tell cathy to call her dad give those mafia 1 million $

9th:The Mafia leader back to their headquarter which mafia leader can leave game.

10th:When we kill those 4 skilled guard,we grab cathy and go B's lorry to go away.

11th:A mysterious guy showed up and throw a smoke(Sleep gas) then me and agent mirulkeem fell sleep

12th:Cathy been kidnapped again.

13th:at the scrreen put 3 days later....

14th @mirulkeem called funshion for backup.

15th:So me , agent mirulkeem and funshion went to power plant to rescue cathy.

16th:Mafia Leader was pattroling at the place which cathy been held.

17th:those 5 mafias which is mafia group leader and recruit was guarding

18th:Mafia group leader help mafia leader.which is @takmokkimon

19th:and 2 mafia guarding A (sonofhero and @ayammas_69 )

20th:2 more mafia guarding B(which no ppl want to apply yet please apply)

21th:2 more mafia help guard cathy outside.

22tho not forget the mysterious man.the mysterious man should wear the skull mask.and he is hiding A basement.(come apply for mysterious man now.)

23th:after killing all mafia except the mysterious man.we quickly chg map to red mansion.

24th:Mysterious man bring some skilled mafia which is sonofhero and ayammmas_69.

25th:Me and funshion tell mirulkeem to get cathy out of red mansion.but communication failed no line.

26th:me and funshion ran to the tunnel in red mansion take a rest coz funshion badly injured.

27th:we decide(i mean the 3 agents)go to Insane hospital.

28th:Arrived there.we go inside take some medicine(medkit) to heal funshion wound.

29th:Mysterious man and those 2 skilled mafia know that we were there.

30th:me and mirulkeem decide let funshion take cathy back to Garena's headquarter.

31th: when we buying some time for funshion.me and mirulkeem get shoot and i throw a green smoke

32th:mirulkeem throw the red smoke.

33th:so we go blue team base to camp and use some of the medicine(medkit )

34th:mirulkeem dont feel safe so we decide to go at the place which have many bath tub which is fliped over.

35th:Unfortunately, me and mirulkeem get killed by mysterous man and 2 mafia with melee.(they pick maybe hachet suitable)

36th:Me and mirulkeem cant get out coz we died.

[saifulzamri]

Nak act!!NOW!!!!

ok..u want to act what role..

mafia
mysterious man
cathy

which one?

[DJ_Dreamer]

ok..u want to act what role..

mafia
mysterious man
cathy

which one?

LoL act now? ayammas_69 and mirulkeem no on9. maybe night

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about the but communication failed no line. i forgot to wirte mirulkeem was going to call helicopter but no line

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about the greeen smoke it should be gas grenade

[saifulzamri]

hmmm i think about the story let @takmokkimon think but all i need is

1st: all people party to celebrate christmas in rappongi @takmokkimon u think what will they say)

2nd:suddenly a group of mafia showed up and kill some people then they saw cathy which is rich(u will be this role? please apply sooner tomorrow practice)

3rd: they kidnapped her.

4th: Cathy's father worried and call Garena's agent (Which is me and mirulkeem)

5th:me and @mirulkeem found that Cathy is in Sand Strom2 located in red team house .

6th: there are 2 guard 1 at the right door 1 at the front door.

7th:2 more guard pattroling the place

8th the mafia leader which is @saifulzamri is tell cathy to call her dad give those mafia 1 million $

9th:The Mafia leader back to their headquarter which mafia leader can leave game.

10th:When we kill those 4 skilled guard,we grab cathy and go B's lorry to go away.

11th:A mysterious guy showed up and throw a smoke(Sleep gas) then me and agent mirulkeem fell sleep

12th:Cathy been kidnapped again.

13th:at the scrreen put 3 days later....

14th @mirulkeem called funshion for backup.

15th:So me , agent mirulkeem and funshion went to power plant to rescue cathy.

16th:Mafia Leader was pattroling at the place which cathy been held.

17th:those 5 mafias which is mafia group leader and recruit was guarding

18th:Mafia group leader help mafia leader.which is @takmokkimon

19th:and 2 mafia guarding A (sonofhero and @ayammas_69 )

20th:2 more mafia guarding B(which no ppl want to apply yet please apply)

21th:2 more mafia help guard cathy outside.

22tho not forget the mysterious man.the mysterious man should wear the skull mask.and he is hiding A basement.(come apply for mysterious man now.)

23th:after killing all mafia except the mysterious man.we quickly chg map to red mansion.

24th:Mysterious man bring some skilled mafia which is sonofhero and ayammmas_69.

25th:Me and funshion tell mirulkeem to get cathy out of red mansion.but communication failed no line.

26th:me and funshion ran to the tunnel in red mansion take a rest coz funshion badly injured.

27th:we decide(i mean the 3 agents)go to Insane hospital.

28th:Arrived there.we go inside take some medicine(medkit) to heal funshion wound.

29th:Mysterious man and those 2 skilled mafia know that we were there.

30th:me and mirulkeem decide let funshion take cathy back to Garena's headquarter.

31th: when we buying some time for funshion.me and mirulkeem get shoot and i throw a green smoke

32th:mirulkeem throw the red smoke.

33th:so we go blue team base to camp and use some of the medicine(medkit )

34th:mirulkeem dont feel safe so we decide to go at the place which have many bath tub which is fliped over.

35th:Unfortunately, me and mirulkeem get killed by mysterous man and 2 mafia with melee.(they pick maybe hachet suitable)

36th:Me and mirulkeem cant get out coz we died.

then what??another mysterious agent come in..(me.heheh)
help cathy...and kill the mafia and decide 1 on 1 with mysterious man..i win...

haah..?

[Arcton]

Sad Ending boo

[saifulzamri]

make good ending la...

[DJ_Dreamer]

then what??another mysterious agent come in..(me.heheh)
help cathy...and kill the mafia and decide 1 on 1 with mysterious man..i win...

haah..?

LOL idk.about me and mirulkeem died then do what idk.

37th:@funshion tell cathy to get out and funshion finding us then he see our body at the floor.

38th:he say "OMG what happen in here"(the OMG u can wrtie full name)then ayammas_69 say welcome to Insane Hospital bye2 then killed funshion

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Sad Ending boo

make good ending la...

Sad ending mroe good.zzzzzz u remind me those ultraman in the TV want good ending? they always win .whe n i was little i wacth it everytime but i got bored coz the ultraman always win so i cheer the monster.but the ultraman always get helped.zzzz make me angry

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about the 38 part before doing that funshion dont forget to wear melee armor.

38th:he say "OMG what happen in here"(the OMG u can wrtie full name)then ayammas_69 say welcome to Insane Hospital bye2 then stabbed funshion.

39th:Funshion said lucky me i wear some armor. "eat this bullet u mafia!" funshion said.

40th @ayammas_69 just want to use awp but failed.

41th:Funshion take the awp and killed mysterious guy and @sonofhero.

42th:funshion find out that mysterious guys is his old frend(travis or adam anything)

43th:@funshion take his bomb and bomb himself.

[saifulzamri]

LOL idk.about me and mirulkeem died then do what idk.

37th:@funshion tell cathy to get out and funshion finding us then he see our body at the floor.

38th:he say "OMG what happen in here"(the OMG u can wrtie full name)then ayammas_69 say welcome to Insane Hospital bye2 then killed funshion

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Sad ending mroe good.zzzzzz u remind me those ultraman in the TV want good ending? they always win .whe n i was little i wacth it everytime but i got bored coz the ultraman always win so i cheer the monster.but the ultraman always get helped.zzzz make me angry

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about the 38 part before doing that funshion dont forget to wear melee armor.

38th:he say "OMG what happen in here"(the OMG u can wrtie full name)then ayammas_69 say welcome to Insane Hospital bye2 then stabbed funshion.

39th:Funshion said lucky me i wear some armor. "eat this bullet u mafia!" funshion said.

40th @ayammas_69 just want to use awp but failed.

41th:Funshion take the awp and killed mysterious guy and @sonofhero.

42th:funshion find out that mysterious guys is his old frend(travis or adam anything)

43th:@funshion take his bomb and bomb himself.

lol..cam u write it properly..write it again...the true full story....

[DJ_Dreamer]

lol..cam u write it properly..write it again...the true full story....

zzzz it took me 3 minute write those thing.zzz

btw have some improvement

CAMERA MAN = @Koompa

SCRIP WRITER = @takmokkimon

MYSTERIOUS MAN = UNKNOWN

MAFIA LEADER = @saifulzamri

MAFIA GROUP LEADER = @takmokkimon

MAFIA RECRUIT = @sonofhero

MAFIA RECRUIT = @ayammas_69

MAFIA RECRUIT = UNKNOWN

MAFIA RECRUIT = UNKNOWN

MAFIA RECRUIT = UNKNOWN

MAFIA RECRUIT = UNKNOWN PLEASE DO APPLY FOR THE MAFIA RECRUIT

AGENT = @Apakaumau12

AGENT = @mirulkeem

CATHY = UNKNOWN

BACKUP TEAM = @funshion

THIS IS THE LIST OF ACTOR AND THEIR ROLE

​FIX ME IF WRONG OR IMPROVEMENT

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take this as an ex

their movie cool

[saifulzamri]

ok here is it..we only open the recruiting until this tonight..if still not enough ppl..here the solution one of us take u roles...okey??

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let me try to write the story

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zzzz it took me 3 minute write those thing.zzz

btw have some improvement

CAMERA MAN = @Koompa

SCRIP WRITER = @takmokkimon

MYSTERIOUS MAN = UNKNOWN

MAFIA LEADER = @saifulzamri

MAFIA GROUP LEADER = @takmokkimon

MAFIA RECRUIT = @sonofhero

MAFIA RECRUIT = @ayammas_69

MAFIA RECRUIT = UNKNOWN

MAFIA RECRUIT = UNKNOWN

MAFIA RECRUIT = UNKNOWN

MAFIA RECRUIT = UNKNOWN PLEASE DO APPLY FOR THE MAFIA RECRUIT

AGENT = @Apakaumau12

AGENT = @mirulkeem

CATHY = UNKNOWN

BACKUP TEAM = @funshion

THIS IS THE LIST OF ACTOR AND THEIR ROLE

​FIX ME IF WRONG OR IMPROVEMENT

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take this as an ex

their movie cool

i try to write a complete story..i post it this night..

[takmokkimon]

23th : after killing all mafia except the mysterious man.we quickly chg map to red mansion. ( all mafia including me and @saifulzamri ??? )

hmmm i think about the story let @takmokkimon think but all i need is

1st: all people party to celebrate christmas in rappongi @takmokkimon u think what will they say)

2nd:suddenly a group of mafia showed up and kill some people then they saw cathy which is rich(u will be this role? please apply sooner tomorrow practice)

3rd: they kidnapped her.

4th: Cathy's father worried and call Garena's agent (Which is me and mirulkeem)

5th:me and @mirulkeem found that Cathy is in Sand Strom2 located in red team house .

6th: there are 2 guard 1 at the right door 1 at the front door.

7th:2 more guard pattroling the place

8th the mafia leader which is @saifulzamri is tell cathy to call her dad give those mafia 1 million $

9th:The Mafia leader back to their headquarter which mafia leader can leave game.

10th:When we kill those 4 skilled guard,we grab cathy and go B's lorry to go away.

11th:A mysterious guy showed up and throw a smoke(Sleep gas) then me and agent mirulkeem fell sleep

12th:Cathy been kidnapped again.

13th:at the scrreen put 3 days later....

14th @mirulkeem called funshion for backup.

15th:So me , agent mirulkeem and funshion went to power plant to rescue cathy.

16th:Mafia Leader was pattroling at the place which cathy been held.

17th:those 5 mafias which is mafia group leader and recruit was guarding

18th:Mafia group leader help mafia leader.which is @takmokkimon

19th:and 2 mafia guarding A (sonofhero and @ayammas_69 )

20th:2 more mafia guarding B(which no ppl want to apply yet please apply)

21th:2 more mafia help guard cathy outside.

22tho not forget the mysterious man.the mysterious man should wear the skull mask.and he is hiding A basement.(come apply for mysterious man now.)

23th:after killing all mafia except the mysterious man.we quickly chg map to red mansion.

24th:Mysterious man bring some skilled mafia which is sonofhero and ayammmas_69.

25th:Me and funshion tell mirulkeem to get cathy out of red mansion.but communication failed no line.

26th:me and funshion ran to the tunnel in red mansion take a rest coz funshion badly injured.

27th:we decide(i mean the 3 agents)go to Insane hospital.

28th:Arrived there.we go inside take some medicine(medkit) to heal funshion wound.

29th:Mysterious man and those 2 skilled mafia know that we were there.

30th:me and mirulkeem decide let funshion take cathy back to Garena's headquarter.

31th: when we buying some time for funshion.me and mirulkeem get shoot and i throw a green smoke

32th:mirulkeem throw the red smoke.

33th:so we go blue team base to camp and use some of the medicine(medkit )

34th:mirulkeem dont feel safe so we decide to go at the place which have many bath tub which is fliped over.

35th:Unfortunately, me and mirulkeem get killed by mysterous man and 2 mafia with melee.(they pick maybe hachet suitable)

36th:Me and mirulkeem cant get out coz we died.

[Arcton]

ok here is it..we only open the recruiting until this tonight..if still not enough ppl..here the solution one of us take u roles...okey??

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let me try to write the story



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i try to write a complete story..i post it this night..

Thanks Man! Is There A Contest Going On??? :P I Lazy Write Script