i dont liek it

[Sjoerd]

[The Game]

it looks good and i know exactly why you dont like it the background killed the picture but the rest and the render looks good 8/10

[SpaWn]

The rendr on the back of it's hood looks poorly cut, the green effect is the only thing i really like about this signature, the background should be removed and replaced, by some simple brushing and C4D's. Since i like the green effect, i would suggest getting rid of the background, adding a new black background, smuding some C4D's while messing with the shape Dynamic and scattering of the smudging brush. Then, add some nice C4D clipping masks, and then, a bit more smuding. Then a C4D ontop of the render slightly, just to cover up the poorly cut part. That way i think this could be a really nice signature.

[lostcausejr]

nice bg nice text .. im not saying anything but maybe you should be on gfx team

[Hyak]

it wasnt the bg the green circle ruined it

[Sjoerd]

Yeh but without the green circles it wud be empty and i tried some c4d's but it didnt fit well in the image

[lostcausejr]

Yeh but without the green circles it wud be empty and i tried some c4d's but it didnt fit well in the image

then try something be sides c4ds like stocks n brushes -.-

[daniliard]

good 1 sjla dude 9/10