Try making it a bit colourful ..
And what is that line in the middle ..?
Instead of Jupiter .. add in some moons and an asteroid ..
Hey all am still a noob at GFX but i did some tut as some requested , i followed the tutorial but i replaced the planets with my own he used earth but i used in the middle a brown planet and the other 2 are Jupiter hope you like it ;D give me suggestions to make it better
Try making it a bit colourful ..
And what is that line in the middle ..?
Instead of Jupiter .. add in some moons and an asteroid ..
Last edited by Symmetrical; 04-12-2013 at 10:58 AM.
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Really nice ! Good job !
There seems to be no real focal point as the planets are not equidistant apart.
I'd suggest not using two of the same renders in a single image.
The shadows are not consistent with the light source presented.
The line of light also causes some big pixelation problems with its contact point with the main planet.
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well, fantastic!
The main planet in the middle has too many jagged edges. Stars look too blurry. Should have some that are sharp and blurry to create some perspective depth.
i removed the sun and blur in the middle but the plant still has that jagged shit
Earth edges messed up and that flare needs work done on it.
Try following this tutorial
for a beginner it doesn't look that bad.. but there could be improvement, i just woke up, so gimme time to wake up a lil and ill CnC it more.
Looks sexy
random light in the middle of the picture
Not bad. Got it in blue?
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