It ain't bad although the bird looks like a blob because no beak also the other wing should be visible and above to the righ of the current visible wing, cept a bit darker, also a good thing to do is take a soft brush and make it low opacity, and duplicate the bird or its wings, and then smudge it down and up a bit no left or right, just up and down, this will add the effect of them have been flapping
also check out the typography post, i added a new version, and I think it looks great and would love some opinions