(Need Criticism) Business Card

[Whiskey]

Could I get some constructive criticism on my business card for my Graphics Design Business? Thanks ( I haven't finished the backside yet...well post when finished)
I might be posting some different designs on here...not sure yet :P
(it is 5x bigger than he actual Business card size (3.5 x 2) I will make it smaller before I print obviously :P


Here is the proof that I made it :P
HERE

[QuasiChill]

Add in a phone number, add in your name as well and in the lightning bolt, make the light blue "shiny parts" blend better, it looks like a simple bump on the thing, and not the thing itself being raised.

But other than that, Looks Great

[Whiskey]

Add in a phone number, add in your name as well and in the lightning bolt, make the light blue "shiny parts" blend better, it looks like a simple bump on the thing, and not the thing itself being raised.

But other than that, Looks Great

I didn't add my name becuz...ya know internetz :P and Thank you, I will definitely fix the lighting bolt. I don't do stuff by phone :P

[QuasiChill]

I didn't add my name becuz...ya know internetz :P and Thank you, I will definitely fix the lighting bolt. I don't do stuff by phone :P

I just said the name in case you actually didn't but I assumed that's why there wasn't one
And you may not enjoy business by phone, but it will increase traffic, easier accessibility makes more people come, and a lot of people would rather go by phone rather than E-mail, also, big companies that pay big for designing, would prefer BY FAR by phone

[jo132]

Look really good

[Whiskey]

Look really good

Thanks /WasTooShortButIsntAnyMore :P

[OnurEdemen]

Hi, Can you do me like these? On the 'cloNz' I want to write.

(My english don't very well)

[Whiskey]

Hi, Can you do me like these? On the 'cloNz' I want to write.

(My english don't very well)

I will happily make you one, but it is going to be completely different than mine :P

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Hi, Can you do me like these? On the 'cloNz' I want to write.

(My english don't very well)

Also, you might not understand what it is...It is a Business card...its a card you give to someone to they can contact you about business...

[OnurEdemen]

I will happily make you one, but it is going to be completely different than mine :P

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Also, you might not understand what it is...It is a Business card...its a card you give to someone to they can contact you about business...

Okey I understand you.I want to a gamecard such as banner okey?
And thank you.

[IV2B]

I like the text,it remembers me borderlands' Tediore weapons.
However,it's a businness card,you need to look professional.

WHile the text is good,i'd suggest you to either make it 2D styled OR a FANCY 3D style. Making 3D while not being good at it doesn't look professional.

IMO: a nice 2D with well-mixed colors (a 3 color card would be nice),using heavy and saturated colors,would look much more professional.

My suggestion:
Make the text 2D styled,make something that links the background with the text,pick 2 or 3 colors,don't make distrurbs in your card,they'd not look like you see them now and result in a really bad effect.
Also,remember to make the text BIG as the card will be small,and the text has to be impactful.

[Whiskey]

I like the text,it remembers me borderlands' Tediore weapons.
However,it's a businness card,you need to look professional.

WHile the text is good,i'd suggest you to either make it 2D styled OR a FANCY 3D style. Making 3D while not being good at it doesn't look professional.

IMO: a nice 2D with well-mixed colors (a 3 color card would be nice),using heavy and saturated colors,would look much more professional.

My suggestion:
Make the text 2D styled,make something that links the background with the text,pick 2 or 3 colors,don't make distrurbs in your card,they'd not look like you see them now and result in a really bad effect.
Also,remember to make the text BIG as the card will be small,and the text has to be impactful.

Yes, I will be posting a couple more of my designs sometime soon. This was my first "sketch" up. ThankYou

[OmeGaa]

i think that you should loose the blue glow and blend in the main text a bit more

[Bisuone]

Simpler is better. I'd lose the really distracting background image and opt for a solid color (even white is good).