[Comment] New LP

[!~_Creedy_~!]

OK.. here's an LP i just made i now it looks simple but it's because I need more help from you guys, especially mods to make more tuts please well please give me feedback, comment and rate

[IMG]https://i517.photobucke*****m/albums/u331/creedy1994/Fabolous-2.jpg[/IMG]

soooo what do ya think???

[[MPGH]Doc]

Poor choice in render, no blending, c4d's look bad, pentool/brush doesn't fit in very well.

try using a render that isn't cut-off, use larger and better effect and abstract c4d's, and don't use pentooling unless your good at it. You'll improve though.

[!~_Creedy_~!]

Thanks.. this is exactly what i need FEEDBACK ON HOW TO MAKE IT BETTER

THANK YOU

[[MPGH]Doc]

Your welcome mate.

[-ParallaX]

i like it.. 'cept for the head being cut off... lol

[!~_Creedy_~!]

The render came like that ... that's why

[Vizz]

Yeah look at my LP, get some ideas.

Energy had made my LP, he covered up the head which got cut-off.

[!~_Creedy_~!]

LOL, that's EnergyK (pro) im still learning cut me some slack.

[Vizz]

Did i say something bad? All i said was too get some ideas, so you can improve.

[M 3 R K 3 D]

Great job creedy, want a preview of my lp? I'll post it in a few. But good job looks kinda like some c4ds and a render [not blended] slapped on :\ I suck at lp's so I can say anything. But I do respect you creeddyy (:!!

[Hyak]

you can see where it cuts off = horrible blending
try gradient maps to fit the colors in
just using c4ds is bad

[!~_Creedy_~!]

Thanks M 3 R K E D, your awesome too so dont worry everyone is good/bad at something

[M 3 R K 3 D]

Hehe, thanks. I can't make Lp's I gave up on mine. It was like 3 layers lol. A BG render and text Lawl! hehe (: I suck.