This is actually pretty good.
It has a lot of meaning as well, which always makes the best poetry.
/Bump
Here's a few things put together in a poetic style. all of the events are true
lost some friends in a drunk car accident. wanted to write something about it for the first time.
This story starts with a handful of few,
growing up with each other not knowing what to do.
Hanging out smokin' weed with no repercussions,
thinking we were invincible and that nothing can touch us.
So we started to get a little out of control,
not thinking just drinking, robbing the local liquor store.
We would drive up to the mountains drunk as hell,
swerving and reckless but we didn't care.
Little by little our futures were getting bleak,
drugs and alcohol was the only thing we'd think and speak.
We were burning the candle from both ends,
who'd think it'd lead up to a fucking dead end.
The day the tires stopped touching the ground,
we learned about ourselves and everyone else around.
They both wanted to grow up and become a star,
but our selfishness just ended it in a car.
Our lives were never the same that day,
all we could do is just sit and pray.
With the tears fallin' down our face,
unable to stay in place,
uncontrollable emotions; our minds were a mental case.
All we had was our tears and fears,
ending it in both of their senior years.
We were the only ones to blame,
thinking that our lives were just a game.
A cold winter night that was so fucking beautiful,
lead up to a crash and ended with a funeral.
just alittle something. hope you like it
This is actually pretty good.
It has a lot of meaning as well, which always makes the best poetry.
/Bump
You were seeking strength, justice, splendour.
You were seeking love.
Here is the pit, here is your pit.
Its name is Silence..
thanks guys. tried to write something meaningful and true. could be rap lyrics or something, but I'm too white