Mmm..
I would of toned down the render,
and possibly removed the border / changed it to white.
render is pretty pixel-y.
Overall its decent.
Keep up the good work.
^-^
Revised:
Old:
Took me around an hour in a half to get everything placed where I wanted it.
If anyone wants, I will indeed make a tutorial.
REVISED 8/18/09 5:36 PM EST
Last edited by cyanmage; 08-18-2009 at 04:42 PM.
Mmm..
I would of toned down the render,
and possibly removed the border / changed it to white.
render is pretty pixel-y.
Overall its decent.
Keep up the good work.
^-^
Yea the render came pixely I tried to fix it a bit but it messed up the depth.
i like it, and dont like it..
too empty imo
7.5/10
The border distracts too much from the focal. i suggest tone it down or diff color. I like the composition but it needs some more blending. Still a pretty nice looking tag. Kiu :3
Revised, changed focal and effects near it a bit and border.
Yeah, i like the revised one, looks much better
7/10
Thanks. =)
Np, keep up the good work
yes the revised is much better. Gj on that. Kiu. :3
i like der revised one