What was the render you started with?
It's so dark.
I know it's abstract, but the lighting leaves a lot to be desired.
Bring the background brightness up a tad, and adjust the focal lights accordingly.
You were seeking strength, justice, splendour.
You were seeking love.
Here is the pit, here is your pit.
Its name is Silence..
This piece has potential.
Like others said, the pure darkness ruins it for me.
If you just filled some of the space, or brightened it up, it would look great.
I love the design you were going for though.
Keep at this style, I like it.
No man, it's really great, just brighten it up a bit