The depth blur should be lower its too much.
And I prefer the lighting in picture one, that is badass.
the second one is so-so.
This light room was followed by a tutorial.
What I'm going to do from here is start learning all the other shit you can do with c4d. Just starting to realize that c4d is an amazing program.
I'll keep you guys posted with my work .
It looks good, but personally I think the fontstyle is kind of.. too hard to read in that angle?