You'll stop being a sentimental ******.
Hey, here's another poem (lyrics for a song to be precise), that I wrote some time ago. It's about a mercenary that has been forced to kill his loved one.
Blue = Chorus
Green = Verse
Red = Bridge
Well I am a mercenary, I kill for money
And if you're in my way, I'll take you away
As I see the darkened skies, I see blood in your eyes
This time you got me for good, faith never understood
There's blood on my hands, going to no man's land
As I'm taking my last breath, I can't say I'm awake
I'd never thought we could go this far, I'd never thought it could turn out like this
I'd never thought you'd make me do this, I'd never thought I'd kill you
In a blink the bullet pierced right through her heart, the heart of the one I loved, our hearts torn apart
Now it's too late, no you're gone, what have I done? What have I become?
I still see your face in the mist, I can still hear your voice in my head
We will be, together forever, even death cannot do us part
So I am a mercenary, I kill for money
And if you're in my way, I'll take you away
As I see the darkened skies, I see blood in your eyes
This time you got me for good, faith never understood
There's blood on my hands, going to no man's land
As I'm taking my last breath, I can't say I'm awake
Was saving his life, really worth giving yours? And not only give yours, I've just killed us both
With another bullet gonna end this misery, make the pain go away
This is not fate, we reap what we sow, no one else to blame and it's my own fault, I know
In this moment the pain, is so unbearable, end of the line, suffering is mine forever
I still see your face in the mist, I can still hear your voice in my head
We will be, together forever, even death cannot do us part
Can you predict what happened in the end?
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You'll stop being a sentimental ******.
Suicide
much deep
there's nothing left for you here.
Reav3R (01-24-2014)
Obvious ending: He suicides by shooting himself with his gun.
Alternate Ending: He will take revenge by killing his employer and then gets killed by his guards, leaving everything he had behind.
Alternate Ending 2: This pain will be with him forever, rendering him a broken person with no hope to live but he wouldn't suicide. He punishes himself by living and suffering.
No, you'll stop taking things at face value.
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lol.. nice22
Anything can PM me. I'm from Malaysia.
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We do have a section for these things.
One more thing, the blue is too close in color to the green.
It's all just chorus.
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It is supposed to be under art, but I can't find it.
It might be my display then.
Are you talking about this section? It doesn't appear to be a place for poetry.
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Meh .
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Minion: 11/28/12-3/15/14
This sounds like it could become a story for a potential game
Or maybe it already has been in a game?
Godlike.