Anybody have a feedback?
This is my first pixel arts.
Please tell me what you think about them.
I want to make some pixel arts and learn from what I made bad on theses.
A shield:
I don't really know... at the beginning it was supposed to be a shield:
A sword:
Another sword:
Last edited by vertvert; 08-22-2014 at 07:13 AM.
Anybody have a feedback?
first off; since the GFX section isn't all that active it can be 24-49 hours before anyone actually replies, so be patient; As for the art.. the shield looks like someone threw a bit too much gradient on it.. (very subtle color change makes it look cleaner) the 2nd shield (looks more like a badge now); same issue.. the swords are simple and flat (and that's usually what you want from pixel art as it's not overly flashy
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@taken4time, ok, thanks for the tips
I will try to make it more realistic next time.
It was the first pixel arts I was doing so... I didn't knew if it was good or not...
If anybody got any other tips or feedback, feel free to post it here
yeap a bit too much gradient.
the 1st sword seems alright.
the shield, seems... erm.. cracked or something. yea I know its pixel art but just doesn't look right
I agree with what you said... I'll try to add some new ones soon. Maybe you will find them better.
I just made a new sword.
64x64:
128x128:
The shields' shape and shading are terrible, especially the latter.
The swords are alright.
My suggestion is to focus more on how depth would affect shadows and light.
Thank you, I really appreciate your comment
More pixel art should come really soon.