its looks nice but the focal is to hard to see.
Text
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Textless
[IMG]https://i269.photobucke*****m/albums/jj51/Espada242/ODST2.png[/IMG]
I think i like the text one better
i tried for more attention on the explosion
but yeah, had a hard time trying to keep him bright
Focal problems. Concentrate towards the render/stock more, instead of the explosion stuffs going on back there.
The trooper isn't too clear and could've been done a bit better.
The one with the text is better btw.
Render isn't very noticable but very nice. Definately your best.
I don't like the fact it's one colour.
With Text is better.