Me singing + rapping

[HalfBajan]

I haven't sang before
pls criticise

I was originally going to just solo in the second half of the song but then I wrote more.

https://soundcloud.com/djtrafford/trafford-bipolar-man

[Dajackle21]

This sounds really good man

[HalfBajan]

This sounds really good man

Aw fuck yis, I've listened to it too many times to tell if it's good or not. Thanks mang

[Dajackle21]

Do you listen to ODESZA or Blackmill by chance?

[HalfBajan]

Do you listen to ODESZA or Blackmill by chance?

Used to listen to a little bit of Blackmill yeah, haven't for a long while though

[Eternity]

I am sorry man but not my style of music.

Good Luck through

[molot]

the song is very pretty text a little less

[HalfBajan]

the song is very pretty text a little less

Yeah, hence why its called Bipolar man I guess

[Derpik]

It's not bad, but the text could be better

[HalfBajan]

It's not bad, but the text could be better

Do you guys mean lyrics or what

[Derpik]

Do you guys mean lyrics or what

yes .

[wan]

I liked it, the lyrics were decent. All in all I thought it was really good.

[Unknown]

Reminds me of The Eden Project a bit. Not a massive fan of the style but I guess it's all good. If I'm honest it got a bit boring but it's probably just me thinking that. gj.

[Bodvar]

Not bad. You should start doing this more often. I loved the beginning. Very nice beats. Maybe in the rap parts, don't want to sound mean or bad or whatever, but you seem so... " dead", like you're just reading a text you know? It is great and I really like it, but with the rap parts you sound so... strange. But for the rest it is very good. The lyrics are great too.

EDIT: Just read that this is the first time that you sang a song. To be honest that is actually amazing for a first time. Keep it up!

[Live]

It's a really good song. Good job mant his is some good stuff!