....what the...............
This isn't a review, it's a synopsis.
You also spoiled story elements that really don't matter to the story and are really only there in the last few episodes......
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Ok let me put this clearly: A review is not simply "here is the plot", I liked it, 8/10.
Try to say why you like it in detail. Describe what you thought was good/bad.
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On the site itself: Decently designed, but minimal content.
Also your paypal article is laughable. Paypal is a service to link your credit card/money. It's not actual "paypal money" itself.