Text is nice.
The green brushes..they dont suit, dont blend with the stock,cuz the stock is darker.
This seems like a good comment to start from.
I see you tried creating a flow with the brushes, but the flow with the gun and stuff is pointing upwards so you might want to follow that as a genearl rule.
The green brushes don't fit true, try incorporating more effects, C4D's are really helpful.
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