Im assuming that this is your first? If it is, it's alright, the only decent part is the text, you got that down, the by just looks like the render just distorted to be blurred diagonally. No real work, just looks like you made the crappy back ground and pasted the render and added text.
-5 for the background
-5 because nothing else was done, you just added the render
+2 for text.
Wow you opened a c4d all by yourself? No it is not clearly evident as the render itself isn't, I can't even tell what it is. It's a statue made of shit that's burning? Anyway, you still did nothing so my verdict stands.