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    3 days work

    So these are the things I've made in the last 3 days keep in mind that I started learning this week so that's why they suck i would like feedback on how I can improve

    I'll post the other 6 later also tell me what you think about my sig
    o know i need to get rid of the text so dont mention that
    didnt get to finish it but critizize it anyway
    Got nothing to say about this one
    Last edited by name13; 09-06-2010 at 01:20 PM.

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    I love it! Just change the font. kinda hard to read in my opinion. and remove "made by"
    Otherwise its great. also try to add some C4D's or some other stuff to fill in :P.
    Great job. 4/5

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    Quote Originally Posted by Personality View Post
    I love it! Just change the font. kinda hard to read in my opinion. and remove "made by"
    Otherwise its great. also try to add some C4D's or some other stuff to fill in :P.
    Great job. 4/5
    How bout the second one and my sig

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    Quote Originally Posted by name13 View Post
    How bout the second one and my sig
    yes i like what you did with the gradient map. great job. maybe add more shapes or figures. i like it 4/5 aswell
    Although your signature needs a tiny bit of work. try finding a better render. and dont do the white outline. :P

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    I'm gonna take out the made by and change the font but I like the simplicity of the first one
    I knew I should have added more to the second one
    And my sig yeah I need a better render i didn't try too hard to get rid of the background so that's the white outline it took me like 25 minutes and most of that time was making the background which you can't even see and choosing a gradient map that looked good

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    Quote Originally Posted by name13 View Post
    I'm gonna take out the made by and change the font but I like the simplicity of the first one
    I knew I should have added more to the second one
    And my sig yeah I need a better render i didn't try too hard to get rid of the background so that's the white outline it took me like 25 minutes and most of that time was making the background which you can't even see and choosing a gradient map that looked good
    Yeah. Well i like them they just need small tweaks. good luck. looking forward 2 more :P

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    1st would definitely look better without the "made by" in it. Sometimes simplicity is good.

    2nd is really good. I like it.
    '08 MPGH OG

    You get the bag and fumble it
    I get the bag and flip it and tumble it
    Straight out the lot, 300 cash
    And the car came with a blunt in it
    Lil mama a thot, and she got ass
    And she gon' fuck up a bag
    Pull up to the spot, livin' too fast
    Droppin' the dope in the stash
    In Italy, got two foreign hoes, they DM me
    Drop the top when it's cold
    But you feel the heat
    Be real with me, just be real with me
    Eat it up like it's a feast
    They say the dope on fleek

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    The first one with the text at the bottom right makes it looked ripped.

    LOLWTFBBQ
    Quote Originally Posted by ViciousArt
    And I've been doing photoshop work for a very long time, and I've never heard of BLANE.

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    i like the third one remove the shadow and the background gradient for more night sky(up) to emerald(down) water style , and decrease the opacity of the city reflection also resize the render cuz it look wider than it supposed to be .... this is just my opinion if u like it that way its ok i like it either ways
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    Your mom looks ripped(not and actual comeback)
    The text clearly says mpgh at the beginning

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    Quote Originally Posted by name13 View Post
    Your mom looks ripped(not and actual comeback)
    The text clearly says mpgh at the beginning
    he has a point
    it does make it looked ri
    and if by the rare chance u made that whole design on it from scratch props
    if not meh
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    sums up wat i though

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    Post originals for all 3.

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    What are originals? Tell
    Me then I will I've got all the stocks but idk what originals are

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    Quote Originally Posted by name13 View Post
    What are originals? Tell
    Me then I will I've got all the stocks but idk what originals are
    Post the stocks then.

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    i like the last one i deno why

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