well if u are trying to demonstrate that he is pushing his past shouldn't u i dono try to ripple or blur the "past part" a lil bit ? so the now part stand out a lil bit or reverse it to get more past stand out, plus the left hand render got a bad cut hair , i would say u may wan to blend the arm a lil .
i'm not pro .. i know but i'm just giving u my opinion maybe it helps.
Playing Eroges/DigiArt sculpting (No ... At internship)
i cant call u a narufag yet... since when does itachi have chacrastrings, besides if he used it i think it should be red... :3 next time also choose a smoother cutout of itatchi... maybe one with Mangekyou Sharingan