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    new signature CNC please

    alright, well this time I focused on depth and text more than anything... I did have to cut out the render myself, and it didn't work out to well, so if you're going to say "shit render cut out job" or something that is close to that, please don't I know I failed the cut out comparison without fire and with gradients <~ though I don't know much about gradients
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    You didn't do a good job on the depth well kind of yeah but idk it's both
    It's LQ the Render and the background looks pixelated Text needs to be higher the colors are nice but the flames don't go well
    Idk what the focal is I mean obviously it's the render but my attention isn't drawn too it

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    I don't like the fire effect... but other than that, its good!

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    so, if i took the fire out, and moved text, it could possibly be better? cause i have psd open right now, I just want to improve and say " I Have a good text for people to look at "

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    yeah ^^

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    alright, editing, and reposting in 30mins, please check back?

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    It needs more blending and this is really small.

    Try using like gradient maps and stuff.

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    since the sig size is small dont squash your redner in it just get the important parts like the wing,face upperbody..

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    so maybe make the render smaller, and add some gradients?

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    you took a background and slapped on a LQ render, probably made with Magic Wand, plus some random fire effects which were LQ too. All that and some horribly done text = 1/10.

    At least you tried.

    Definitely read up on some tutorials.
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    i didnt just take the background, i smudged and blurred it to add some depth and sharpened the pole to show it was upclose, and the fire effects were from a completely diff render.... dont even know what an "LQ" is.

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    weve gone over this
    "low quality" shit looks pixelated

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    wait what? when did we go over this? lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by DylanOwnsYou View Post
    i didnt just take the background, i smudged and blurred it to add some depth and sharpened the pole to show it was upclose, and the fire effects were from a completely diff render.... dont even know what an "LQ" is.
    Then you have no idea what depth is, and you live life in 1 dimension, cause I see no attempt at adding depth. So you didn't do the fire effects yourself, yet they're still effects.

    LQ = low quality.

    I'll repeat myself for emphasis: read up on some tuts.
    '08 MPGH OG

    You get the bag and fumble it
    I get the bag and flip it and tumble it
    Straight out the lot, 300 cash
    And the car came with a blunt in it
    Lil mama a thot, and she got ass
    And she gon' fuck up a bag
    Pull up to the spot, livin' too fast
    Droppin' the dope in the stash
    In Italy, got two foreign hoes, they DM me
    Drop the top when it's cold
    But you feel the heat
    Be real with me, just be real with me
    Eat it up like it's a feast
    They say the dope on fleek

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    well, just using tuts again.... you know, a lot of tuts work best when u follow with their stuff for colors, and stuff so you know that you are doing it right, and when that happens, it's not your idea, and then again, it's a bit harder to work with. (that's just my oppinion)

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