dude, it looks good for me anyways u learned ure smudgeing from tuts? or? do you want to make one? i saw youre videos on youtube btw.
8/10 from me
From written tuts mainly and experience. And yes that was my idea for a next video when i get round to it.
Originally Posted by Scrcrw
too me it has one major flaw
my eye is immediately drawn to his right shoulder (well the one on the right side) because of the brightness there
you need to fix that cause the focal should be his face
IMO i don't see this as a problem as his face is quite dark and there is a lot more detail on his right shoulder. Plus the fact that the shoulder is in the foreground, is much larger and your eye is drawen to it anyway - as well as the fact that the shoulder is closer to a third and the head is in the centre. Having the head less of a focal also draws less attention initially to the text.
Last edited by Kyle; 01-23-2011 at 03:47 AM.
War does not determine who is right- only who is left.