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    Two newer pieces



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    cnc, comment, suggestions

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    I really like the 1st one. The sharpening is just right, the lighting is superb, and the colors blend in perfectly. Great job. /gewv

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    It should be cleaner around his head, because I want to focus at this eyes, not the shitty c4d's around it. Ehm, the lightning is correct, the depth looks good. Nothing more to be added I guess. Keep the rule of thirds in mind, and please, PLEASE, remove the red bar at the bottom.

    2nd one,I know that it is abstract, but it's waaaaaaaaaaaaay too small. You can't really see any details because of that size, either expand it or turn it into a wallpaper.

    Keep it up, you're improving rapidly.

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    Quote Originally Posted by .Amnesia View Post
    It should be cleaner around his head, because I want to focus at this eyes, not the shitty c4d's around it. Ehm, the lightning is correct, the depth looks good. Nothing more to be added I guess. Keep the rule of thirds in mind, and please, PLEASE, remove the red bar at the bottom.

    2nd one,I know that it is abstract, but it's waaaaaaaaaaaaay too small. You can't really see any details because of that size, either expand it or turn it into a wallpaper.

    Keep it up, you're improving rapidly.
    His eyes was the intended focal point
    How does the rule apply to this? I didn't place any text
    I agree about the red bar tho

    The 2 bs was bigger but made it smaller, regret it tho

    Thank u for ur input

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    leon one is epic like it more

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    The first one is so awesome!!
     

     
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    Quote Originally Posted by MC² View Post


    His eyes was the intended focal point
    How does the rule apply to this? I didn't place any text
    I agree about the red bar tho

    The 2 bs was bigger but made it smaller, regret it tho

    Thank u for ur input
    The rule of thirds applies to each and every picture, because that´s where the eyes of a human being focuses on automatically.
    And I can see that you were intending to let the eyes get the focal point, but you kind of fucked up by putting that orangy blob over his left eye, and the horrible c4d´s in front and behind of his head.

    But that´s just my opinion.

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    First One Is So Good

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    First one is a money maker.

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    The first one is great, but that hand D;

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    Nice, I like the first one.

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    I haev always loved your work, only it's a little off at your second one, if you made it bigger so it had more details. It would be awesome.
    edit: Maybe add some blur at the non-vocal points in the first tag
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    Last edited by debbe; 11-11-2012 at 05:11 AM.


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    That first one is pretty sex, I actually think that the focal is his face you positioned it correctly for it to be that way imo. Do keep in mind the rules of thirds though it's not a law that you have to follow every single time but its useful in some cases. Its not just for text in applies to all subjects in your image it just helps you position text in way that makes it look better. Heres a video



    The second one looks like you gave up on it pretty quickly it looks like you were on the right track though but you didn't add enough detail to it. In this case applying the rule of thirds would definitely be good because right now you put that big object right in the middle.

    In Blanes tag he has much more detail on the c4ds and he composed it differently.

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