lol Trust me noobster, I had the same problem. I used effects on my text and everyone was like "No, don't use effects" and I continued to use them because I thought they looked cool, than I tried regular text and it actually looked alot better.
Anyways, text should be close to the render on one side of it.
Ugh no real CnC in this thread at all, and tbh theres a lot of things wrong, but i agree with most people that it's your best piece probably so far. I haven't seen this render before, so i don't know if you did the blue shining effect around the hands, if you did it's a nice touch to the piece. Your attempt to work on depth in this has been spoiled by overblurring the background, and has tbh mucked it up quite a lot. Looks overblurred, and you should have tried to leave around 10px around the render unblurred on this piece, for some nice depth, it would probably add good perspective as well. As for the text which you've been saying you don't know where to place it, just pick arial, use eye dropper tool for the colour, and be creative. Thats the best way for text, try put it going along his shoulder or something.
Your best so far, but the overblurred background ruins it.
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