I think you could've used a better music choice, and the music didn't exactly match up with the clips themselves. If you had spent a little more time and aligned the kills with, say the bass, that would've looked better. Also, that 1.5 minute music hangover is quite unnecessary, and only serves to make the video process slower and make people think that there's more to your montage, where there really isn't.
Lol woot finally done processing.. although its still not completely finished lmao. Once its 100% done then u can watch in max HD for sexy quality haha. And i just wanted some random music in the video not very caring about How it matches up
My Video Editing work
I Have one called Forever Pjanoo Like a low G6, but it's copyrighted and idk how to upload it o.O