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    Does this sound good...

    So i'm in college now and I am trying to join the student government as a senator and I have to write a few sentences about why I'm running for it.
    This is what I put.

    "As an LSCO Freshman and person in general, I value leadership and many other important attributes. As a senator, I will work my hardest to help better my peers and the populace of my society."
    Does the last part even make sense? I was trying to use big words.

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    Ehh, I don't really understand in these stuff because I'm just 15 but I think it's a little short, is this like a note (a small text that you can add for yourself) or a "why should we pick you" kinda shit?

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    Yeah it's basically asking why they should pick me. The lines on the paper aren't too big and I think this would take most of it up. It's not so much the length I'm worried about but the content. Most notably the last part. I'm not sure if it makes sense.

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