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    New song

    I can't remember who to mention so yeah fuck

    It's me rapping, I wrote the lyrics too.
    Instrumental is by a friend that I go to uni with.
    It's pree deep and depressing and made my girlfriend cry...............................................
    https://soundcloud.com/polar-sound/p...t-omokage-tlou

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    Instrumental is dope. enjoy the sound too. Great job dude @HalfBajan

    "Suicides on my fucking mind, I'm Stevie Wonder blind"
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hova View Post
    Instrumental is dope. enjoy the sound too. Great job dude @HalfBajan

    "supersize on my fkn mind, im Stevie Wonder blind"
    Cheers mang! yeah I fucking love the instrumental.
    By the way idk if you said that for sarcasm or not but just to be safe,
    I say "Suicides on my fucking mind, I'm Stevie Wonder blind" lyrics are in the desc :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by HalfBajan View Post


    Cheers mang! yeah I fucking love the instrumental.
    By the way idk if you said that for sarcasm or not but just to be safe,
    I say "Suicides on my fucking mind, I'm Stevie Wonder blind" lyrics are in the desc :P
    haha rip me. I kept replaying and just typed what I heard. it sounded in the beginning like you were just reading the script, sounded a bit more confidant as it went on. Looking forward to hearing more

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    > I think you could have worked a bit more on your reverb from 0:10 to 0:20, sounds a bit like a default preset to me.
    >at 0:45, sounds a bit too loud to the left compared to the right, you should have put a bit more action on the right speaker or lowered the delay volume

    Your vocals sit perfectly in the mix, though I'd lower the volume by 2-3 dB. great job

    Edit: A bit of multi-band saturation on the vocals for ~2kHz+ would have been great up until 0:50, your voice is a bit low and lacks a bit of high end imo
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    Instrumental isn't bad, but not offense man but your voice just doesn't seem like a rapper type; the lyrics aren't bad though, glad you wrote them yourself. If you wanna hear some rap I like check this.

    https://soundcloud.com/titus/titusremix1

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    You should so do more like this and work as you go on. I'd listen to your music a lot more often if you did more like this.

    Good work, keep it up!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gab View Post
    > I think you could have worked a bit more on your reverb from 0:10 to 0:20, sounds a bit like a default preset to me.
    >at 0:45, sounds a bit too loud to the left compared to the right, you should have put a bit more action on the right speaker or lowered the delay volume

    Your vocals sit perfectly in the mix, though I'd lower the volume by 2-3 dB. great job

    Edit: A bit of multi-band saturation on the vocals for ~2kHz+ would have been great up until 0:50, your voice is a bit low and lacks a bit of high end imo
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hiroyuki View Post
    Instrumental isn't bad, but not offense man but your voice just doesn't seem like a rapper type; the lyrics aren't bad though, glad you wrote them yourself. If you wanna hear some rap I like check this.

    https://soundcloud.com/titus/titusremix1
    See now I hate that type of shit (Not being offensive). Can't stand trap and can't stand fake lyrics.
    But thanks dude

    Quote Originally Posted by Cohen View Post
    You should so do more like this and work as you go on. I'd listen to your music a lot more often if you did more like this.

    Good work, keep it up!
    Thanks man! I'll improve over time of course and improve my tone.
    I'll also be able to record in a professional environment soon enough so the quality should increase too
    Last edited by HalfBajan; 03-03-2016 at 08:06 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by HalfBajan View Post
    fake lyrics.
    There is no such thing as fake lyrics; lyrics always come from somewhere, just because someone doesn't pour their sobs story heart into self related lyrics doesn't mean they aren't real, lol.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hiroyuki View Post
    There is no such thing as fake lyrics; lyrics always come from somewhere, just because someone doesn't pour their sobs story heart into self related lyrics doesn't mean they aren't real, lol.
    By that I meant I don't like rap that's about hyping yourself up and having no meaning.

    Edit: Each to their own. Not looking to start a debate
    Last edited by HalfBajan; 03-03-2016 at 08:27 PM.

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    Lyrics and beat are good but don't like your flow/accent to be honest.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Law View Post
    Lyrics and beat are good but don't like your flow/accent to be honest.
    Yeah dude I don't even know what my accent is hahaha. It just goes from British to Australian and it pisses me off too.
    Thanks though dude

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    I think it's quit good.
    I enjoyed it

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    the instrumental is beast man keep on making these skits cheers

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