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    true i did think about it and yes they are my lyrics i am only 15 and everyone at my school say that i am really good at writing lyrics i just gotta work on my way i put them out their right?

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    I just listens to it, man ur good,

    actually better than Luke.

    I liked the lyrics.

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    thank you demo =) you all are really nice

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    shag, you gotta take some swearing out/more passion. Sounds like you were forced into doing it

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wolf View Post
    shag, you gotta take some swearing out/more passion. Sounds like you were forced into doing it
    Lol, I agree. Sounds like somebody forced you to.

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    well my dad was home and he doesnt like it when i get into all this nonsense music he says so i had to keep it low and just plain out i will give more emotion next time tho =) were the lyrics good tho?

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg12345 View Post
    well my dad was home and he doesnt like it when i get into all this nonsense music he says so i had to keep it low and just plain out i will give more emotion next time tho =) were the lyrics good tho?
    Do it when your dads not home =

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    true that goes with alot of other stuff like have the girl over XD but yea were the lyrics good do you think wolf?

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    Lyric's were good, but they sounded too scripted to be a freestyle.

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    we have a rap section / move

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    true that last part was a free style after the see threw them bull shit lies part then it went freestyle ha

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    You kinda stumbled with your words at the beginning but yeah, they lyrics are awesome.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ilyle View Post
    we have a rap section / move
    It's dead thus no-one uses it, thus the general is the right section.

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    thank you both vital and wolf if you want i will post another one but my recorder only recored 1 min of audio then after that im screwed i gotta find something i can go for like 2-4 mins so i can get the full thing instead of speeding everything up ya know?

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg12345 View Post
    thank you both vital and wolf if you want i will post another one but my recorder only recored 1 min of audio then after that im screwed i gotta find something i can go for like 2-4 mins so i can get the full thing instead of speeding everything up ya know?
    Sure, post another. I would like to hear it.

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