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    new song Immortal XD

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    plz give me yalls ideas =)

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    come on guys hit this shit up and let me know what you think

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    "cut my wrist up and down verticly" made me laugh


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    hahah why did it make you laught lmao but its all good XD

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    Not bad, Would like to hear it with some beats


     


     


     



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    It is better in words, not sounds.
    Get a good singer to sing it.
    She paints a pretty picture, but the story has a twist, the paint brush is a razor, and the canvas is her wrist.

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    seth i wasnt tryin to sing the shit haha if i wanted to i would of lmao also i am not aloud to do this type of music when my dads home and he is when i did it so thats why i couldnt so back up alright besides that thankx

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg12345 View Post
    seth i wasnt tryin to sing the shit haha if i wanted to i would of lmao also i am not aloud to do this type of music when my dads home and he is when i did it so thats why i couldnt so back up alright besides that thankx
    Naw I could see this actually being a hit.
    With a real rapper.
    Try to sell some of your shit.
    She paints a pretty picture, but the story has a twist, the paint brush is a razor, and the canvas is her wrist.

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    my dad wont let me and i already have it getting published any ways so its all good just gotta find some beats and i can rap it lmao besides that the lyrics are all gettin published

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    That shit flows nice! /yea
    Just don't be so timid next time, rap it harder cuz those r some hard ass lyrics

    "Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired signifies, in the final sense, a theft from those who hunger and are not fed, those who are cold and are not clothed. This world in arms is not spending money alone. It is spending the sweat of its laborers, the genius of its scientists, the hopes of its children. The cost of one modern heavy bomber is this: a modern brick school in more than 30 cities. It is two electric power plants, each serving a town of 60,000 population. It is two fine, fully equipped hospitals. It is some fifty miles of concrete pavement. We pay for a single fighter plane with a half million bushels of wheat. We pay for a single destroyer with new homes that could have housed more than 8,000 people. This is, I repeat, the best way of life to be found on the road the world has been taking. This is not a way of life at all, in any true sense. Under the cloud of threatening war, it is humanity hanging from a cross of iron."
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    hahah thankx man =)

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    You do need to find what I would call "flow". You got some lyrics that aren't too bad, but its not hard to read a poem. Putting it to a beat, mastering the vocals, proper delivery and timing, and then using proper vocal stacking. Lookin at a lot of different work. Trust me, I'm a producer

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