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    Beta rap (Note this is Typed out)

    Soo mpgh here is what happens when i write i was not trying soo uhh yeah here



    Check Check Check This shit on ................. ok ok iight check it yah bitch i blow ya brains out ta


    back ya head nigga ya fucking dead ya this is death rap bitch better get my shit right cause i aint

    steping back in to that hiphop game fuck Fortune and fame nigga i run this game bitches better

    step back let me show you how i roll come for a walk with me in da streets of jane and fench bitch


    ya better be packing or ya not gonna make it out alive dis my hood my getto my fucking show i run

    this city yah bitch boy you better know it or your gonna blow it bitch step the fuck back fall back

    get back shit son there gos a crack head damn thats soo sad wasten his like over a rock mayne

    das not right he aint even able to fight shit i hope he dont get jumped tonight lil niggas be chillin and

    having fun then this crack head comes around daum shit went down well this is my story about

    how it is soo next time you diss me try an live my life Nigga nigga

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    listened it in your sig. its ok i guess. should be in the poetry/gansta rap section though


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    it is but faggots dont go der soo i posted it here too /

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    Beats crunk lol but you need to get better flow, and stop overly cussing lol you say fuck every other word where its just out played like when some rappers say nigga way too often. But yes, work on ya flow, and better vocal quality. Fuck, I will edit it for ya if ya want

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    you suck
    now go complaint to mister nigger.

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    srry to say but[IMG]https://techbuddha.files.*********.com/2010/01_suck.jpg[/IMG]

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    Actually looks good now make a recording and lets see if it sounds good.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ilyle View Post
    Actually looks good now make a recording and lets see if it sounds good.
    Its in his sig


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    Wasn't before...Or I didn't see it damn im blind.

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    No no its not that text is not rapped yet just sumthing i did last night butt this is new rap text ima start writen

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    Hmm might be better with sound



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