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    another thing i wrote

    [YOUTUBE ] [/YOUTUBE]

    here another one and idk y that voice was like that but ill fix it later but yall know what yo do flame whatever but as long as you tell me what you like and dont ok =)
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    lol "culumbus can blow me"

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    It sucks.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dead Bones Brook View Post
    It sucks.
    Yea but the culumbus part made me smile 0_o

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    dead bones how does it suck haha please explain ?

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    It's just pathetic. I got no words for it.

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    hum ok well that helps thanks for letting me know that =)

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    ok
    get a beat and stop just saying things super fast .

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    hum ok i will

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    And stop making new videos.
    You should just quit life.

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    ok dead bones thanks for showing what you think about it =) i wont get mad its ok tho i wont stop cause theirs always ways to get better ya know =)

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    No, you'll never get better.
    Seriously, you should juist jump from a flat instead of making more.

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    yeah not great. did u listen to it? not everyone can rap. also whoever said get a beat is right. that along with saying things so fast we dont know what ur saying but maybe it makes sense because we cant here it doesnt work. do you really hate the country or were u trying to make a rap.
    other than that keep it up.

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    Love your lyrics, Need a bit more control vocally. *sigh* I'd like to post my audio up but its on z.share.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Eqlipse6 View Post
    Love your lyrics, Need a bit more control vocally. *sigh* I'd like to post my audio up but its on z.share.

    Lady Gaga is shit.

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