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    OMG SO AMAZING!! ARE YOU SIGNED!?!?!?!?

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    i can sense your sarcasam it hurts dude it does but its all good

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    I can hear your breathing.

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    yea i kno haha still workin on tha timing and stuff

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    I thought too much cursing. More lyrics less cursing. I know its just freestyle though so I can understand. Why not actly try writing a song and then rappin it instead of freestyle.

    "Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired signifies, in the final sense, a theft from those who hunger and are not fed, those who are cold and are not clothed. This world in arms is not spending money alone. It is spending the sweat of its laborers, the genius of its scientists, the hopes of its children. The cost of one modern heavy bomber is this: a modern brick school in more than 30 cities. It is two electric power plants, each serving a town of 60,000 population. It is two fine, fully equipped hospitals. It is some fifty miles of concrete pavement. We pay for a single fighter plane with a half million bushels of wheat. We pay for a single destroyer with new homes that could have housed more than 8,000 people. This is, I repeat, the best way of life to be found on the road the world has been taking. This is not a way of life at all, in any true sense. Under the cloud of threatening war, it is humanity hanging from a cross of iron."
    - Dwight D. Eisenhower

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    alright i will try was it good besides the cursing?

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg123 View Post
    i can sense your sarcasam it hurts dude it does but its all good
    it sounds fine. chill. /

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