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    better freestyle tell me what you think =)

    heres another freestyle tell me if this ones better and like lyrical and emotion wise?




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    I can hear you breathe in some parts but other then that it's alright...Original.

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    thanks man and i am still working on tha breath part and the timing haha

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    Meh. Decent...

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    No problem man, just keep up what you're doing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ganja Hero View Post
    No problem man, just keep up what you're doing.

    yea thanks and crusty whats wrong with it that you dont like??

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    Its Alright You Know What You Gotta Improve... Timing And Try Not To Repeat Too Much...

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg123 View Post
    yea thanks and crusty whats wrong with it that you dont like??
    Idk, not a fan of rap.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hot Sauce View Post
    Its Alright You Know What You Gotta Improve... Timing And Try Not To Repeat Too Much...


    alright i will thank you for tha advise and crusty o ok ahahah that makes sense =)

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    Thanks I Appreciate The Thanks... Depending On The Type Of Rap Your Doing Kinda Sounds Like Death Rap But If You Wanna But A Lil Bit Of Hip Hop Into It Add Some Tone In It And Get Into It... You SOund Like Your Talking In A Raping Way... I Hope You Know What Im Saying Change The Tone Up A Bit... This Song Sounds Like


    Change It Up A Bit To Sound Like This...


    Just Listen To How They CHange Up There Pitch A Little Bit... Make It Sound Fun! /yea

    /Thanks Are Appreciated

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    yea i get it and idk it depends what im felling but i will try to put more emotion in it =)

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    Alright Bc Thats All Ya Need Because Its Good Over All Thats All You Need To Change Up And Your Perfect!

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    thanks man you think i could go some were if i keep it up?

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    hey guys what yall think?

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShAg123 View Post
    hey guys what yall think?
    I think u double-posted.Other then that,it's Okay.

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