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    Storyline...

    Okay so im writing a short story, i need some help from you guys...
    Its written in first person and basically hes in a car, with a blindfold on its moving and the people are speaking arabic, ive just got to hes been asked if hes awake and the 2 people have got out of the car, they are about to grab him out of the car

    Where do i go from here...

    Serious replies only please

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    They lock him up in a fucking room .



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    Chopper sound, shooting, unblindfolded and all the Arabs are dead, US army have flags all over the place. Happy endings, fin
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    Quote Originally Posted by Coeus View Post
    Chopper sound, shooting, unblindfolded and all the Arabs are dead, Croatian army have flags all over the place. Happy endings, fin
    That sounds way better



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    and thats the end
    you should use your mind dumdum
    it isnt to hard to make a simple story

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    Quote Originally Posted by okled View Post
    and thats the end
    you should use your mind dumdum
    it isnt to hard to make a simple story
    Looking for different ideas, i need some inspiration. dont comment if you dont have anything productive
    dumdum.

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    Quote Originally Posted by thestupidshrimp View Post
    Looking for different ideas, i need some inspiration. dont comment if you dont have anything productive
    dumdum.
    There was a guy called Juan...



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    Quote Originally Posted by thestupidshrimp View Post
    Serious replies only please
    At least people read this bit :P

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    i dont like it when it has to be serious

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    They lock him up, then the S.W.A.T come rushing in and blow up the door as the Arabic's are putting a torch into the guys leg. Then S.W.A.T shoots the Arabics' ass off.
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    zombie attack.

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    zombie attack.
    Zombies sucks