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    Quote Originally Posted by Evelyn View Post

    In her gallant stance
    She commands the tides
    Slowly they flow and dance
    She looks on in pride
    Skin as pale as snow
    Her eyes a piercing arrow
    As they lament in woe
    Between the stars in space
    Souls gently interlace
    Reaching for the moon's embrace

    Its a personification of the moon
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    Quote Originally Posted by Evelyn View Post

    In her gallant stance
    She commands the tides
    Slowly they flow and dance
    She looks on in pride
    Skin as pale as snow
    Her eyes a piercing arrow
    As they lament in woe
    Between the stars in space
    Souls gently interlace
    Reaching for the moon's embrace

    Its a personification of the moon
    10 Lines exact
    Simile : Skin as pale as snow
    Metaphor : Her eyes a piercing arrow

    Etc.

    I can make another if you don't like it = I did it so fast.
    tysm, repped, and thanking
    thats good enough for me


    EDIT: 10 thx for writing it so fast
    Last edited by deadskulz; 03-12-2011 at 04:28 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by deadskulz View Post


    tysm, repped, and thanking
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    Don't I get one for trying
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