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    made this up in 5 minutes, oya

    I have my , ups and downs my highs and lows, why cant my emotions go in a steady flow, theres nothin that will keep me from feeling this way, it never goes away, not at night or at day, everything in my life seems to fluxuate, i just try to pray and pray and hope for the day that these thoughts just sit there, die and decay


    oh snap. if only i could rap

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    Theres a Section for this..
    I think

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    Quote Originally Posted by whit View Post
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    at least fuckin contribute damn rats. dont just post links and call it good.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cake Boy View Post
    at least fuckin contribute damn rats. dont just post links and call it good.
    You didn't even look at the links, then.

    By the way, your "rapping" or whatever that is kinda looks bad.
    Section the lines so we can clearly see what you're saying.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nitekillr View Post
    You didn't even look at the links, then.

    By the way, your "rapping" or whatever that is kinda looks bad.
    Section the lines so we can clearly see what you're saying.
    not a rap, just some lyrics i thought up in 5 minutes, also, make up a beat in your head and read it. dont criticize if you cant do better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cake Boy View Post


    not a rap, just some lyrics i thought up in 5 minutes, also, make up a beat in your head and read it. dont criticize if you cant do better.
    You asked us to give you help, and I'm helping you.
    I know you made it in 5 minutes, but I usually don't take time into consideration.
    I once made a 3-page essay in 30 minutes and got 97% on it (without reading the book).
    5 minutes I can understand though. It's good for that amount of time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nitekillr View Post
    You asked us to give you help, and I'm helping you.
    I know you made it in 5 minutes, but I usually don't take time into consideration.
    I once made a 3-page essay in 30 minutes and got 97% on it (without reading the book).
    5 minutes I can understand though. It's good for that amount of time.
    essays and rhymes are two totally different things, i could write 10x more than i could rhyme in 5 minutes. and i never asked for help, i said contribute somethin instead of postin links. and thanks for sayin its good for the amount of time.

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    5 minutes + newcomer = ok. If it took you THAT long to write that and you have experience, that's sad. Otherwise, good. Just make sure u seperate the bars so it's easier to read and you're /

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    ive never rhymed before.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cake Boy View Post
    ive never rhymed before.
    You have a valid excuse to suck, although it wasn't bad at all.

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    I can rhyme too!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cake Boy View Post


    essays and rhymes are two totally different things, i could write 10x more than i could rhyme in 5 minutes. and i never asked for help, i said contribute somethin instead of postin links. and thanks for sayin its good for the amount of time.
    How exactly can we contribute if you don't want us to comment on your 'rhyme'.

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    You're going in the wrong direction. This is not the right section.

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