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    I'm in a competition

    It's basically battle of the remixes. This is the competition.

    I'm in it, and here's my remix of Seba's "Painted Sky" (google it, it sounds totally different from the original).

    Rise

    Tell me what you think. Yeah, it's long as fuck, 13 minutes, but that's 2 hours of work condensed into that.

    Good? No? No trolls please, I need actual answers.

    On the right side, you see the groups I'm in. That's the competition group.
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    Quote Originally Posted by J Miliam View Post
    It's basically battle of the remixes. This is the competition.

    I'm in it, and here's my remix of Seba's "Painted Sky" (google it, it sounds totally different from the original).

    Rise

    Tell me what you think. Yeah, it's long as fuck, 13 minutes, but that's 2 hours of work condensed into that.

    Good? No? No trolls please, I need actual answers.

    On the right side, you see the groups I'm in. That's the competition group.
    It sounds kind of flat to me.

    A lot of parts are also, really, really repetitive. Maybe you could cut some parts of the song and speed it up to make it a tad more interesting...?

    That's all I got, sorry.

    By the by, for whatever reason the song makes me think of sun screen lotion.

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    Quote Originally Posted by CheeseTea View Post

    It sounds kind of flat to me.

    A lot of parts are also, really, really repetitive. Maybe you could cut some parts of the song and speed it up to make it a tad more interesting...?

    That's all I got, sorry.

    By the by, for whatever reason the song makes me think of sun screen lotion.
    Fuuuck. It ends this sunday. You gotta listen to the whole song though... it gets better. It's repetitive because I was thinking more of a in the club kinda thing. More of minimalistic.

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    Is it just me, or is the bass whacked out?
    '08 MPGH OG

    You get the bag and fumble it
    I get the bag and flip it and tumble it
    Straight out the lot, 300 cash
    And the car came with a blunt in it
    Lil mama a thot, and she got ass
    And she gon' fuck up a bag
    Pull up to the spot, livin' too fast
    Droppin' the dope in the stash
    In Italy, got two foreign hoes, they DM me
    Drop the top when it's cold
    But you feel the heat
    Be real with me, just be real with me
    Eat it up like it's a feast
    They say the dope on fleek

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    Quote Originally Posted by J Miliam View Post
    Fuuuck. It ends this sunday. You gotta listen to the whole song though... it gets better. It's repetitive because I was thinking more of a in the club kinda thing. More of minimalistic.
    Yeah, I just kinda skipped through different parts...

    I can see how it would kind of work in a club, but it's not really "dance" music, in my opinion anyway.

    I'm sticking with my original opinion: it needs to be slightly faster, and a little bit shorter.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Killian View Post
    Is it just me, or is the bass whacked out?
    Depends on what you're listening to it with.

    Quote Originally Posted by CheeseTea View Post


    Yeah, I just kinda skipped through different parts...

    I can see how it would kind of work in a club, but it's not really "dance" music, in my opinion anyway.

    I'm sticking with my original opinion: it needs to be slightly faster, and a little bit shorter.
    Why can't I hear what you're hearing.
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    I'm using my surround sound setup. I think its just the song, since I plugged in my headphones and got the same effect.

    But I let it play in the background. I hardly noticed, but I was actually jammin' to it while doing my Calc work.

    I like it.
    '08 MPGH OG

    You get the bag and fumble it
    I get the bag and flip it and tumble it
    Straight out the lot, 300 cash
    And the car came with a blunt in it
    Lil mama a thot, and she got ass
    And she gon' fuck up a bag
    Pull up to the spot, livin' too fast
    Droppin' the dope in the stash
    In Italy, got two foreign hoes, they DM me
    Drop the top when it's cold
    But you feel the heat
    Be real with me, just be real with me
    Eat it up like it's a feast
    They say the dope on fleek

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    Quote Originally Posted by Killian View Post
    I'm using my surround sound setup. I think its just the song, since I plugged in my headphones and got the same effect.

    But I let it play in the background. I hardly noticed, but I was actually jammin' to it while doing my Calc work.

    I like it.
    Thanks. Not too good with mastering with DJ headphones

    Sennheiser sucks dick.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Killian View Post
    I'm using my surround sound setup. I think its just the song, since I plugged in my headphones and got the same effect.

    But I let it play in the background. I hardly noticed, but I was actually jammin' to it while doing my Calc work.

    I like it.
    I get the same effect.
    The bass sounds so weird.
    Still, I love what you've done.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nitekillr View Post
    I get the same effect.
    The bass sounds so weird.
    Still, I love what you've done.
    FUUUUCKKK SENNHEIISERR AND THEIR BULLSHIT HEADPHONES. Imma use my boombox with the woofers on tomorrow and try to master it.

    For the record, I usually don't make music like this. I'm more of hip hop, but I wanted to test my skeelz.

    You wouldn't expect this from a 14 year old with a 6 year old dell now would you?

    Also, which bass is fucked up? The guitar or the kick? If it's like one part of the beat where it's the glitch beat and the kick together, it's supposed to sound like that. Glitch hop.
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    Quote Originally Posted by J Miliam View Post
    FUUUUCKKK SENNHEIISERR AND THEIR BULLSHIT HEADPHONES. Imma use my boombox with the woofers on tomorrow and try to master it.

    For the record, I usually don't make music like this. I'm more of hip hop, but I wanted to test my skeelz.

    You wouldn't expect this from a 14 year old with a 6 year old dell now would you?
    I used to help set up servers and websites when I was 12, so I can easily expect this from someone your age.
    And what kind of Sennheisers do you have? Because "Sennheiser" and "suck" should NEVER be in the same sentence, unless the word "doesn't" is between them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nitekillr View Post
    I used to help set up servers and websites when I was 12, so I can easily expect this from someone your age.
    And what kind of Sennheisers do you have? Because "Sennheiser" and "suck" should NEVER be in the same sentence, unless the word "doesn't" is between them.
    You got a point.

    Sennheisers are shit. They're horrible for music producing, but good for DJing. The point of them is to be loud so you can hear over everything around you. They're like mini mobile speakers. Bass sucked when i first got them, that's why the bass sounds off, I put too much. Sounds empty.

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    Btw, your "Fascinating" you have on your profile is good, too. Listening to it now.

    '08 MPGH OG

    You get the bag and fumble it
    I get the bag and flip it and tumble it
    Straight out the lot, 300 cash
    And the car came with a blunt in it
    Lil mama a thot, and she got ass
    And she gon' fuck up a bag
    Pull up to the spot, livin' too fast
    Droppin' the dope in the stash
    In Italy, got two foreign hoes, they DM me
    Drop the top when it's cold
    But you feel the heat
    Be real with me, just be real with me
    Eat it up like it's a feast
    They say the dope on fleek

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    In all honestly bro, I really don't like it. It just sounds like tons of shit put together, and that voice in the background has me like wtf

    I appreciate your work though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Killian View Post
    Btw, your "Fascinating" you have on your profile is good, too. Listening to it now.

    Stalkin mah shit

    Quote Originally Posted by Danny View Post
    In all honestly bro, I really don't like it. It just sounds like tons of shit put together, and that voice in the background has me like wtf

    I appreciate your work though.
    Had to use the samples to put into the song so it could actually be concidered a remix. Like I said, I usually don't make stuff like this.

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