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    Cool Shuffle Official Intro

    My official intro(i have others but this is the 1 ill use b4 my vids) Please comment and sub also give thumbs up

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    TBH IMO Text was shit
    try not to make is wiggle around i couldnt see what it was saying
    Dicks, That is all.

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    Make clear the text...
    Background could be better
    Improve and contribute to the LoL section, anything you do could save it.


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    Shit intro is shit

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    Too long, too hard to read, to many presets. Try to make it original, but still readable.
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    Music is over-used on the internet and it came in late.
    try using dubstep / hip hop

    Overused TV Simulator effect
    Intro was too long
    Don't wiggle the text that much (referring to the TV Simulator)
    Background was messy


    ratio of the video should be 16:9 to fit YT's widescreen
    (look up Youtube rendering tutorials)

    Give me some text and backgrounds to use and I can make you a sample intro


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    um... well TBH, it was pretty bad, even I can make a better untroo the backgground was shifty, and the text was.....


    anyway nice try. imma learn from your mistakes.

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    Not bad breh.