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    My beginning of my game

    So I'm witing a game design document, and wrote the beginning of the game. Up until you are able to control the character.

    Eugene is the main player, and is a nerd. Like, HEAVY nerd.
    GrandMother is Eugene's grandmother and remains nearly emotionless throughout the game, but is hurting dearly, which will be shown in parts of the game.

    The beginning is as follows (Isn't completed. Need to add some more complaining from eugene.)


    It starts with Eugene in his messy room on his computer. If you want details about what the room will look like, just ask. I've got most details of the room down so far. (It'll BASICALLY look like my room :P)

    Computer:
    BANG BANG, POW!

    Eugene: YES! HIGH SCORE! I finally beat the ultimate computer in shoot-em-up chess!

    GrandMother:

    EUGENE! I NEED TO SPEAK WITH YOU FOR A MOMENT, COME DOWN HERE PLEASE!

    Eugene:
    Can it wait grandma? I'm on a roll!

    GrandMother:
    NO, IT'S REALLY IMPORTANT!

    Eugene:
    Alright, I'll be right there.

    GrandMother:
    I have a story to tell you.

    Eugene:
    Hmm?

    GrandMother:
    A long time ago...

    SCENE CHANGE: Past, black/white peaceful humans and monkeys

    There was once a time when the humans and the monkeys had lived in peace.
    However, this was a time long since forgotten.

    SCENE CHANGE: SlideShow of present, coloured fighting images between human and monkey

    There was one day a monkey, one that had been full of such revulsion towards the human race.
    He made claims such that humans were "evil" and were attempting to take over the world.
    Shunned from the monkey's race - as the majority were in peace with humans -, he decided to create a group.
    One so evil that it would create a war greater than the last.

    SCENE CHANGE: PAST WAR

    They devised an evil plan, too force a human to attack the monkey's leader.
    They wrote a note to the human's leader, Adam, declaring war. Signed from the monkey's leader.
    After the war started, the evil monkey's stole the note back and burned it. Removing all evidence of such a fact, and
    forcing the humans to seem like the evil ones.

    SCENE CHANGE: BURNING NOTE

    Adam had fought valiantly, but to no avail. After nearly 15 years of war, the monkey's retreated.

    *pause*

    GrandMother:
    Eugene, Adam was my father, your great grandfather. He told me to give this note to you just before he died.

    *Eugene recieves note*

    Eugene:
    huh?! My great grandfather was a fighter??

    GrandMother:
    Yes, your great grandfather was the Adam told in all these stories.

    Eugene:
    But grandmother, I had never met him. How could he have possibly known of me?

    GrandMother:
    He was in the military, trying to defend our race in case the monkey's decide to attack again. We told him of you, but he couldn't leave his post in fear of another attack.
    Go ahead, open the note.

    SCENE CHANGE: Opening note
    SCENE CHANGE: OPENED NOTE

    Note:

    Dear Eugene,
    I know you never met me, but I've heard lots about you.
    I know you will be great someday, which is why I have
    such a great task to ask of you.

    For you see, the Monkey's have attacked again. At the
    time of writing this note, they've nearly breached our
    main walls. You're of great decent Eugene, I know you
    can save us. Your grandmother has the key's to the
    basement, go down there and grab my sword I used in the
    last war.

    Good luck, Adam.


    SCENE CHANGE:

    Eugene:
    You sure this was meant for me, not somebody else?

    GrandMother:
    Yes.. I wish it wasn't, but Adam told me very specifically to get this to you Eugene.

    Eugene:
    Can I GIVE it to somebody else?

    GrandMother:
    I'm afraid not, only descendants of our family can wield our sword, and I'm too old.

    Eugene:
    Grr... fine.

    GrandMother:
    Thank you, and believe me, if we could give it all to somebody else I would.

    Eugene:
    But... Grandmother, what does this all mean?

    GrandMother:
    I don't know, but nothing good for sure. Come on, I need to take you to the basement.



    SCENE CHANGE: WALKING TO BASEMENT/ ENTERING BASEMENT

    SCENE CHANGE: Glowing sword in a sheath with a shield.

    SCENE CHANGE: Eugene grabs sword and enter's a battle sequence with two "Leader Monkey"s



    GrandMother: Oh gosh, Adam did always practice his sword play down here...

    Well, I better tell you how to fight, and fast!

    You see the "attack" button there Eugene?


    Eugene:
    Yeah, what does it do?? HURRY UP GRANDMA!


    GrandMother:
    Calm down Eugene, these monkey's are harmless. They're wooden.


    BATTLE SEQUENCE CHANGE: Leader Monkey's change to Wooden Targets. (the names)


    GrandMother:
    Anyways, the attack button uses your most basic attack. It takes up none of your energy. Try it out.



    PLAYER INPUT: Select "attack"
    BATTLE SEQUENCE: Use "attack" spell.
    Lose 30 HP from improper sword play.


    GrandMother:
    Oops, try not to miss the targets next time. Go to the "Inventory" button, and use "HP Potion".


    PLAYER INPUT: Select inventory > HP Potion.

    GrandMother:
    There are also various 'skills' you can use under the "skills" button, but you haven't learned any useful skills.


    BATTLE SEQUENCE CHANGE: Display Skill's screen with "programming" as only skill.


    GrandMother:
    Go ahead and finish up this battle and come upstairs, I'll be waiting for you.

    PLAYER INPUT: Finish battle.


    SCREEN HELP:
    Use the up/left/right/down key's to move your player around, and 'space' to interact with objects such as doors, chests, etc.

    PLAYER INPUT: Grab the sheath / sword.

    if the go out door to early.
    GrandMother:
    Oh, Eugene, there's also a sheath and a shield downstairs. Make sure to grab them, they'll be handy.
    else
    GrandMother:
    Ah, I see you've grabbed the sheath and the shield as well

    GrandMother:
    Here are some more potions for you.

    *Eugene recieved some potions*

    Eugene:
    Thanks grandma...

    GrandMother:
    Be careful out there Eugene, it's dangerous.

    Eugene:
    I shall.


    BEGIN MAIN GAME.



    So yes, this is just a simple little storyline. OBVIOUSLY NOT SOMETHING BIG. (Monkeys are main antagonist? Durr, it's a small game)

    This is NOT a thread where you tell me how to improve it. I design the game, and then program it, and get others to create graphics.

    If you'd LIKE, you can draw some graphics. Just ask me what graphics I need, and what difficulty level you can do. (I have some pretty in depth ideas like rooms, backstory slideshows, etc, as well as some not so detailed. Like enemies, player sprites, etc.)

    *It is a non profit game, and will not recieve any form of payment aside from people who SOMEHOW get my paypal email and send me money... Which nobody would do, cuz this game isn't worth that much effort. :P


    So yeah, this is my beginning which has yet to be implemented, but WILL be. It's designed entirely around being absolutely ridiculous.

    What do you guys think of it? Would you play it for shits and giggles?

    Critisism that will be accepted:

    Just about anything. Just don't tell me to change the storyline, don't tell me this sucks, etc. Positive comments or no comments.
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    I don't need easy, I just need possible. ~ Me 
    
    There are three birds on a fence. Two decide to fly away, how many are left? Three, just because you decide to do something doesn't mean you've done it. ~ Don't know who said this
    
    Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail. ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson
    Quote Originally Posted by VirtualSia View Post
    You both have a very weird and awkward view on Computer science.
    Computer science is about computing, which is programming.
    Definition of computing: The use or operation of computers.
    Turning on my computer = computing = programming
    LAWLFAIL

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    Planet of The Apes.
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    I don't care who you are or what you've done. You have to earn respect.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BigBangBaby View Post
    Planet of The Apes.
    LOVE IT. THAT'S THE NAME.
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    I don't need easy, I just need possible. ~ Me 
    
    There are three birds on a fence. Two decide to fly away, how many are left? Three, just because you decide to do something doesn't mean you've done it. ~ Don't know who said this
    
    Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail. ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson
    Quote Originally Posted by VirtualSia View Post
    You both have a very weird and awkward view on Computer science.
    Computer science is about computing, which is programming.
    Definition of computing: The use or operation of computers.
    Turning on my computer = computing = programming
    LAWLFAIL

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    Quote Originally Posted by VvITylerIvV View Post
    LOVE IT. THAT'S THE NAME.
    No....


    You're story line is reminiscent of that movie. Google it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BigBangBaby View Post
    No....


    You're story line is reminiscent of that movie. Google it.
    DAM, thats a movie? Guess I'm still thinking of a name.

    Seriously though? Cuz I just thought this up in the past like 10 minutes lol. In fact, I was thinking of LOZ: The WindWaker while making this storyline. Kid being called by grandma, etc etc... Except mine goes into basement, LOZ goes to upstairs.
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    I don't need easy, I just need possible. ~ Me 
    
    There are three birds on a fence. Two decide to fly away, how many are left? Three, just because you decide to do something doesn't mean you've done it. ~ Don't know who said this
    
    Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail. ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson
    Quote Originally Posted by VirtualSia View Post
    You both have a very weird and awkward view on Computer science.
    Computer science is about computing, which is programming.
    Definition of computing: The use or operation of computers.
    Turning on my computer = computing = programming
    LAWLFAIL

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    The battle of apes?

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    Quote Originally Posted by VvITylerIvV View Post
    DAM, thats a movie? Guess I'm still thinking of a name.

    Seriously though? Cuz I just thought this up in the past like 10 minutes lol. In fact, I was thinking of LOZ: The WindWaker while making this storyline. Kid being called by grandma, etc etc... Except mine goes into basement, LOZ goes to upstairs.
    Well, it's basically planet of the apes. Humanity, or what's left of it, fighting the simian overlord.
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    Apes are niggers.

    How you gonna code it , Another Unreal game engine fail game ? .

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    Quote Originally Posted by Epic View Post
    The battle of apes?
    I'm trying to think of a ridiculous name now, seeing as Planet of the Apes is taken by that movie, which seems absolutely crazy. I mean, apes CONTROLLING humans? Different than ours. See, in mine monkeys WERE somewhat "pets" to humans, and they most certainly don't have fire-arms.

    Quote Originally Posted by Soldier View Post
    Apes are niggers.

    How you gonna code it , Another Unreal game engine fail game ? .
    allegro, maybe DX9.
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    There are three birds on a fence. Two decide to fly away, how many are left? Three, just because you decide to do something doesn't mean you've done it. ~ Don't know who said this
    
    Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail. ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson
    Quote Originally Posted by VirtualSia View Post
    You both have a very weird and awkward view on Computer science.
    Computer science is about computing, which is programming.
    Definition of computing: The use or operation of computers.
    Turning on my computer = computing = programming
    LAWLFAIL

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    Quote Originally Posted by VvITylerIvV View Post
    I'm trying to think of a ridiculous name now, seeing as Planet of the Apes is taken by that movie, which seems absolutely crazy. I mean, apes CONTROLLING humans? Different than ours. See, in mine monkeys WERE somewhat "pets" to humans, and they most certainly don't have fire-arms.



    allegro, maybe DX9.
    The Ape world.

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    Ape dick .

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    Monkeys league .

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    Quote Originally Posted by Epic View Post


    The Ape world.
    Like it, but the game is directed towards a human's planet rather than an ape's planet. Just that name was so perfect that I loved it. The Human's world just sounds ridiculous, even for a game that's striving for that.
    Quote Originally Posted by J Miliam View Post
    Ape dick .

    Quote Originally Posted by Soldier View Post
    Monkeys league .
    #1 so far.
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    There are three birds on a fence. Two decide to fly away, how many are left? Three, just because you decide to do something doesn't mean you've done it. ~ Don't know who said this
    
    Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail. ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson
    Quote Originally Posted by VirtualSia View Post
    You both have a very weird and awkward view on Computer science.
    Computer science is about computing, which is programming.
    Definition of computing: The use or operation of computers.
    Turning on my computer = computing = programming
    LAWLFAIL

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    I feel a troll.

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    Quote Originally Posted by VvITylerIvV View Post
    Like it, but the game is directed towards a human's planet rather than an ape's planet. Just that name was so perfect that I loved it. The Human's world just sounds ridiculous, even for a game that's striving for that.




    #1 so far.
    How about The Humans and the Apes.

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